7/3/2021 c5 Mountainsong
I hope you will come back to finish this story! Even though English isn't your first language, you have some amazing descriptions, especially from injured Neal's point of view.
I hope you will come back to finish this story! Even though English isn't your first language, you have some amazing descriptions, especially from injured Neal's point of view.
1/31/2015 c5 Guest
Very good story! Keep writing!
Very good story! Keep writing!
8/12/2014 c5 vania
Caramba, agradeço. Estou ansiosa para ver a conclusão.
Caramba, agradeço. Estou ansiosa para ver a conclusão.
11/18/2013 c5 Chanda
Oh, I'm definitely reading this. It's hard, it's so traumatic to think of Neal like that, and Peter trying to get through his own emotions. But I'm reading it, and waiting for the next chapter!
Oh, I'm definitely reading this. It's hard, it's so traumatic to think of Neal like that, and Peter trying to get through his own emotions. But I'm reading it, and waiting for the next chapter!
11/18/2013 c5 2Sansoki
Beautiful! Heart wrenching, powerful, not something I should read before work because I started tearing up, and I don't cry easily. Elizabeth's words to Peter hit me like a punch in the gut, they rang so true. Looking forward to more.
Beautiful! Heart wrenching, powerful, not something I should read before work because I started tearing up, and I don't cry easily. Elizabeth's words to Peter hit me like a punch in the gut, they rang so true. Looking forward to more.
11/17/2013 c5 2ocgirl.fr
Poor Peter, poor Neal !
Can't even imagine being blind/deaf and not knowing what the heck is going on, that must be terrifying. I'm glad El is there to make sure everybody plays by the rules, Peter doesn't need to be exhausted.
I hope Neal will get back to 100% !
Can't wait for next chapter :)
Poor Peter, poor Neal !
Can't even imagine being blind/deaf and not knowing what the heck is going on, that must be terrifying. I'm glad El is there to make sure everybody plays by the rules, Peter doesn't need to be exhausted.
I hope Neal will get back to 100% !
Can't wait for next chapter :)
11/17/2013 c5 1Clara Brighet
*sob* Oh my poor, poor Neal! And Peter, you're making me cry!
In other words, keep up the good work ;D
*sob* Oh my poor, poor Neal! And Peter, you're making me cry!
In other words, keep up the good work ;D
11/4/2013 c4 Anon
brilliant
brilliant
11/4/2013 c4 Guest
This is a really good story so far. Really looking forward to reading more of it. :)
This is a really good story so far. Really looking forward to reading more of it. :)
11/3/2013 c4 Guest
I like it :) eagerly waiting for more
I like it :) eagerly waiting for more
11/2/2013 c4 Blaine
Love it! please continue
Love it! please continue