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6/1/2015 c7 8JaliceJelsa4eva
This story is really great!
3/6/2015 c7 Purdy Girl101
please update
12/24/2014 c7 Guest
Oh, no. The last chapter only received one review?!

Poor you. How unfortunate.
10/18/2014 c7 Guest
hi I just love the story can you please continue it
8/14/2014 c7 Wendy bird
You sholud really finish this. You are a skilled writer.
6/18/2014 c7 Guest
DONT STOP NOW KEEP GOING
2/18/2014 c7 matthiascalis
Hi J.E,

Your writing shows glimpses of talent, and you certainly have some interesting ideas. However, in terms of voice, style, prose, tense, spelling, and point of view, you can still improve. In some areas more than others. If you'd like me to, I could go over some of the issues in your piece. If not, just ignore this.

Cheers!
1/5/2014 c6 Guest
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12/29/2013 c6 Guest
Yeah I'm plenty confused! I'm not sure what's going on! The dark thing is Peter's shadow, but what about blonde Peter? Who is he?
12/25/2013 c1 Guest
This is kinda boring.
12/4/2013 c5 HeirofHufflepuff
THIS IS SO GOOD! Please update soon! The cliffhanger is killing me!
12/2/2013 c5 Guest
Loving this story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter. c:
12/1/2013 c5 47aireagle92
PLease update? I need to know what will happen to Helena!
11/21/2013 c4 Astrid Nightwalker
pleeeaassee write more!
11/19/2013 c4 Chimp 2000
Awesome!

Hurry with the next chapter please!
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