for High School4/6/2014 c4 Rick439
I fucking hate it. It's way way WAY to cheesy. Come on really? He blacks out when she ask him out? I can't enjoy it. Avery time I start to like it something cheesy pops up. Like the brothers staring at the sister. They not like that. So some respect. I love high school A&O's, but I can't enjoy it. Sorry for being so hush.
I fucking hate it. It's way way WAY to cheesy. Come on really? He blacks out when she ask him out? I can't enjoy it. Avery time I start to like it something cheesy pops up. Like the brothers staring at the sister. They not like that. So some respect. I love high school A&O's, but I can't enjoy it. Sorry for being so hush.
12/2/2013 c10 The dark shadow
I love it
I love it
11/8/2013 c8 guest a
i don't mind you taking your time in the story line. in fact i like a long story.
it is just really hard to follow when you don't update for a long time.
but, who am i to say? i don't know what is going on in your life!
it would just be nice if you updated more.
i don't mind you taking your time in the story line. in fact i like a long story.
it is just really hard to follow when you don't update for a long time.
but, who am i to say? i don't know what is going on in your life!
it would just be nice if you updated more.
11/8/2013 c8 The dark shadow
I love it
I love it
11/8/2013 c1 
4bmiller0710
Sandy miller
Age 17
Long sleek black fur most guys trip on ther tails when they see her.
drives a 69 hemi berricuda
Moved schools when her foster parents threw her out and is now looking for new friends maby some that can protect her...
4bmiller0710Sandy miller
Age 17
Long sleek black fur most guys trip on ther tails when they see her.
drives a 69 hemi berricuda
Moved schools when her foster parents threw her out and is now looking for new friends maby some that can protect her...
11/6/2013 c7 The dark shadow
I love it
I love it
10/30/2013 c6 The dark shadow
I love it
I love it
10/21/2013 c5 guest a
okay!
sweet story.
i like how the chapters are, but it would be nice if you made them a bit longer.
update soon!
okay!
sweet story.
i like how the chapters are, but it would be nice if you made them a bit longer.
update soon!
10/21/2013 c5 The dark shadow
I love it
I love it
10/12/2013 c4 The dark shadow
I love it
I love it
10/11/2013 c3 23The Lonely Blitz
Not bad. Work on seperating speech though and a bit more descriptive words used. Other than that, not a bad story.
23The Lonely BlitzNot bad. Work on seperating speech though and a bit more descriptive words used. Other than that, not a bad story.