for High School10/11/2013 c3 The dark shadow
Love it
Love it
10/10/2013 c2 The dark shadow
Love it
Love it
10/9/2013 c2 Alexander
You left it with a pretty good cliffhanger, and set it up good because you could make the yelp a girl or a boy depending on which you put it.
Very good work
I'll be waiting
You left it with a pretty good cliffhanger, and set it up good because you could make the yelp a girl or a boy depending on which you put it.
Very good work
I'll be waiting
1610/7/2013 c1 The dark shadow
It is a good start
It is a good start