for Angry Harry and the Seven7h c6 dennisud
I'm wondering if you will use the Dagworth-Granger extinct house for Hermione later on.
Love how Harry Shit down Dracy-poo!
I'm wondering if you will use the Dagworth-Granger extinct house for Hermione later on.
Love how Harry Shit down Dracy-poo!
10h c1 dennisud
Interesting premise, and so far you have an angry but one that Mentally and Physically prepares himself. I will definitely read this one as I'm also reading another saga by Theolin_Darkstar. Let's see where this goes and other than Ron and the obvious manipulators, he finds good friends, which obviously includes Daphne, Hermione, Neville and Luna for a start.
Again good start!
Interesting premise, and so far you have an angry but one that Mentally and Physically prepares himself. I will definitely read this one as I'm also reading another saga by Theolin_Darkstar. Let's see where this goes and other than Ron and the obvious manipulators, he finds good friends, which obviously includes Daphne, Hermione, Neville and Luna for a start.
Again good start!
12/5 c87 essexclan91
Amazing story. From start to finish. The ending brought a tear to my eye. Thank you.
Amazing story. From start to finish. The ending brought a tear to my eye. Thank you.
12/1 c37 
1OhJustReadIt
Why is your Hermione the most irritating character ever? And why does everyone entertain her antics?
1OhJustReadItWhy is your Hermione the most irritating character ever? And why does everyone entertain her antics?
11/30 c87 1purplevictory
Overall, a very nice story. The second year was cringey, but all the rest was very well done.
1purplevictoryOverall, a very nice story. The second year was cringey, but all the rest was very well done.
11/27 c38 purplevictory
The first 35 chapters of this story were original and well written. I was engaged, I was enjoying the journey. The last three chapters I have read have been a blatant, often word for word, plagiarized version of Chamber of Secrets. And it doesn’t fit with your characters in any way. Somehow, eidetic memory, brilliant and powerful Harry who knows oh-so-much about the wizarding world can’t remember extremely important details like the fact that he already knew about the chamber of secret’s several chapters ago, as well as the fact that Tom Riddle is Voldemort? And he smashed Draco in a duel the last school year, but now he’s worthless at it? And in all his study of the wizarding world he doesn’t know about the stigma connected to parseltongue? He suddenly can’t stick up for himself, he is acquainted closely with the head of the DMLE and several political giants but he doesn’t think to call them? And completely different characts say lines that belonged to other characters in canon? In your stubborn quest to plagiarize JK Rowling’s work word for word you absolutely ruined your own characters.
And yet, I’m going to continue reading. I don’t know why, I am just hoping you get back to your own actual writing soon.
Don’t get me wrong, I love the original books, but I come to fanfiction for original content.
The first 35 chapters of this story were original and well written. I was engaged, I was enjoying the journey. The last three chapters I have read have been a blatant, often word for word, plagiarized version of Chamber of Secrets. And it doesn’t fit with your characters in any way. Somehow, eidetic memory, brilliant and powerful Harry who knows oh-so-much about the wizarding world can’t remember extremely important details like the fact that he already knew about the chamber of secret’s several chapters ago, as well as the fact that Tom Riddle is Voldemort? And he smashed Draco in a duel the last school year, but now he’s worthless at it? And in all his study of the wizarding world he doesn’t know about the stigma connected to parseltongue? He suddenly can’t stick up for himself, he is acquainted closely with the head of the DMLE and several political giants but he doesn’t think to call them? And completely different characts say lines that belonged to other characters in canon? In your stubborn quest to plagiarize JK Rowling’s work word for word you absolutely ruined your own characters.
And yet, I’m going to continue reading. I don’t know why, I am just hoping you get back to your own actual writing soon.
Don’t get me wrong, I love the original books, but I come to fanfiction for original content.
11/24 c87 an.2.tha.d
The first time in a while I’ve shed tears at an epilogue that was so beautiful. Thank you for this wonderful gem of a fan fiction! I think you should share this on webnovel for those that have never been on this app.
The first time in a while I’ve shed tears at an epilogue that was so beautiful. Thank you for this wonderful gem of a fan fiction! I think you should share this on webnovel for those that have never been on this app.
11/11 c11 Guest
Your lengthy lectures on things like the nobility are much too long. Boring.
Your lengthy lectures on things like the nobility are much too long. Boring.
10/27 c5 tricorvus
Love the story. No House of Ravens at Hogwarts. House of Ravenclaw boasts an EAGLE.
Rock on
Love the story. No House of Ravens at Hogwarts. House of Ravenclaw boasts an EAGLE.
Rock on
10/19 c6 jrjsmith0
He has a perfect memory right? So why is he working hard to memorize faces and names?
He has a perfect memory right? So why is he working hard to memorize faces and names?
10/14 c87 Guest
Tnx for this story it was great , the ending got me
Tnx for this story it was great , the ending got me
10/9 c30 1amberfranke1
im confused about this chapter i thought they were in jail so why would he want harry to be there
1amberfranke1im confused about this chapter i thought they were in jail so why would he want harry to be there
10/6 c20 PhoenixDK1984
Did they travel forward in time? Microsoft didn't become public until 1986, so the Potter’s couldn't have bought stocks
Did they travel forward in time? Microsoft didn't become public until 1986, so the Potter’s couldn't have bought stocks