for I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings1/9/2015 c1 Baelzilnea
Hey little buddy!
First of all, you probably wrote this a gazillion years ago, so my reviews don't matter unless you really just care a whole lot:) but I have read all your stories, and I think they are lovely and imaginative. I enjoy your ideas and your methods. There is one thing I would change though.
In all of your stories, you tend to jump from one scene to another with no warning, it can get super confusing and leave your readers trying to play catch up! So my one recommendation, that you can implement in future stories, or add into your current ones, is that you use a line or a stream of letters or numbers to break up your story so that we readers can understand the flow better.
But listen, your story is great, so were your others, I honestly don't review a lot because I feel nervous giving constructive criticism when my own stories are less than perfect, but I think you are really talented, and should keep on writing, because you never know where it can lead!
Hey little buddy!
First of all, you probably wrote this a gazillion years ago, so my reviews don't matter unless you really just care a whole lot:) but I have read all your stories, and I think they are lovely and imaginative. I enjoy your ideas and your methods. There is one thing I would change though.
In all of your stories, you tend to jump from one scene to another with no warning, it can get super confusing and leave your readers trying to play catch up! So my one recommendation, that you can implement in future stories, or add into your current ones, is that you use a line or a stream of letters or numbers to break up your story so that we readers can understand the flow better.
But listen, your story is great, so were your others, I honestly don't review a lot because I feel nervous giving constructive criticism when my own stories are less than perfect, but I think you are really talented, and should keep on writing, because you never know where it can lead!
2511/4/2014 c22 Sydney
No Fred? No Tonks? No Dennis? I am admittedly, disappointed. But I am looking forward to the next update. Please don't keep us waiting too long.
No Fred? No Tonks? No Dennis? I am admittedly, disappointed. But I am looking forward to the next update. Please don't keep us waiting too long.
11/3/2014 c22 Guest
cliffhangers... I hate em.
cliffhangers... I hate em.
9/16/2014 c20 Sydney
True to my word, here I am bothering you to update the story. I know life gets in the way of these stories, but I feel like we're so close to the end. So please find some time to update.
True to my word, here I am bothering you to update the story. I know life gets in the way of these stories, but I feel like we're so close to the end. So please find some time to update.
8/10/2014 c19 Guest
there was a part where you kept calling scorpius, stefan. it's right after she gets to the room of requirement.
there was a part where you kept calling scorpius, stefan. it's right after she gets to the room of requirement.
8/10/2014 c20 HogwartsDreamer113
Oh, Roxie, don't do anything stupid...
I love Scorpius and Stefan's conversation!
Can I make a suggestion though? Sometimes when you switch scenes, I get confused. Maybe you could insert lines to make seperations? If you don't know how, PM me and I'll explain.
Oh, Roxie, don't do anything stupid...
I love Scorpius and Stefan's conversation!
Can I make a suggestion though? Sometimes when you switch scenes, I get confused. Maybe you could insert lines to make seperations? If you don't know how, PM me and I'll explain.
8/1/2014 c17 Syd
Great two chapters. This is one of my favorite fanfics right now. I'm so excited to see what happens in the future. Also, I can't say that I dislike Scorpius and Rose breaking up. I hate them as a couple.
Great two chapters. This is one of my favorite fanfics right now. I'm so excited to see what happens in the future. Also, I can't say that I dislike Scorpius and Rose breaking up. I hate them as a couple.
8/1/2014 c16 Mimi
Ooh, Stefan's POV. I liked it. Maybe more of that?
Ooh, Stefan's POV. I liked it. Maybe more of that?
7/31/2014 c16 HogwartsDreamer113
I loved Stefan's pov! I know he'll do the right thing, but Roxanne will still be pissed when she finds out. I'm so sad it's not Fred. :'(
I loved Stefan's pov! I know he'll do the right thing, but Roxanne will still be pissed when she finds out. I'm so sad it's not Fred. :'(