for Young Justice: Rise of the Silver Scarab7/25/2015 c3 
13HeroUp88
Okay. You're fight scenes are interesting, but could usetheextra umph. And you switched from TiTigress to Artemis. But still good ideas and a good plot.
13HeroUp88Okay. You're fight scenes are interesting, but could usetheextra umph. And you switched from TiTigress to Artemis. But still good ideas and a good plot.
7/25/2015 c2 HeroUp88
It was a good chapter. I thought Nightwing was in command. The next chapter should be interesting.
It was a good chapter. I thought Nightwing was in command. The next chapter should be interesting.
7/25/2015 c1 HeroUp88
It's a great start. It leads the reader on so they can learn more about Katie/Silver Scarab. I like the idea.
It's a great start. It leads the reader on so they can learn more about Katie/Silver Scarab. I like the idea.
5/12/2015 c9 Alzion
Really cool but how does the girl remember her name as she couldn't last chapter?
Really cool but how does the girl remember her name as she couldn't last chapter?
4/13/2015 c4 BubbleEwa
I would've done that thing where you fall backward off a tall perch and let whatever flying thing you have catch you.
I would've done that thing where you fall backward off a tall perch and let whatever flying thing you have catch you.
4/13/2015 c3 BubbleEwa
Hey! Don't be kidnappers! (I personally would have Blizzard Girl win but whatever it's your story.) Blizzard Girl is not gonna be one happy camper when she wakes up.
Hey! Don't be kidnappers! (I personally would have Blizzard Girl win but whatever it's your story.) Blizzard Girl is not gonna be one happy camper when she wakes up.