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5/6/2020 c4 Jessica Dallas
Im bawling. Good story. Really sad though. At least they are together though
1/21/2019 c1 6RachelBarbraBerry1994
The only episodes in season 5 worth watching are, 'The Quarterback, and 'City of Angels. The only episode worth watching in season six is '2009. I can't watch any episodes in those last two seasons with out Finn/ Finnchel.
I think Cory's/ Finn's episode was veeeeeeery sad, but I really think they should have said how Finn died. There is some trooth when Kurt says the line, "What do you say about a 19-year-old who dies? I wanna know how he lived." People don't just die for no reason. There is a reason why Finn died.
Sorry, this first chapter was good.
10/30/2014 c4 Gleek888
I found this story on the WildeAbrams community page and I just want to say that you've done an incredibly amazing job.

I don't usually like to read sad stories because fanfic is my escape from the real world so I normally just read the happy ones but this was really good. I read this on the bus ride home before I knew how you planned on killing the characters off so I must admit that once I found out they died in a head on collision I got a bit nervous for the rest of the trip home.

I loved the scene you set before the crash, I loved how you kept the forgotten characters, Rory, Sugar and Joe whilst also including the newbies in the story by bringing them forward to the S3 storyline, it would've been nice to see Unique here too but I understand that she isn't everybody's cup of tea. Even though it didn't end well the idea of a road trip vacation to celebrate their Nationals win sounded really cool.

Before I started reading I already suspected that Finn was going to be one of the characters which you were going to kill off but I definitely wasn't expecting you to kill off Rachel too! In a way I'm glad you killed them off together because reading about Rachel trying to cope without Finn would've been really heartbreaking. They aren't my favourite characters on the show but it was still so hard to read. I'm so glad you didn't kill off either of my favourite characters (Artie and Kitty), I don’t think I would have been able to get through the entire story if you killed either one of them but part of me kind of wishes you did because it would be interesting to see how you would have handled the death of a character who wasn’t such a prominent part of the show. Will you ever write a happier version of this story with the same characters and pairings except nobody dies?

Unlike the actual tribute episode I love how every character played a part and got a line in your story, Finn and Rachel meant so much to every member of the New Directions so it was only fair that they all had a chance to express their grief. Since she’s one of my favourites I love the vulnerability you gave to Kitty in the few lines that you gave her, I wished they showed more of this side to her on the show because we all know that she had it in her. I know that none of this is “real” but you really made me feel for them all, especially Kurt. The way you portrayed Kurt was brilliant and since you wrote this before The Quarterback so I commend you for how accurately you depicted Kurt’s emotions in comparison to the actual show. I could never imagine myself in Kurt’s shoes, losing his best friend and his brother in one hit (no pun intended) but you really immersed us in his feelings and made us feel what he was feeling so it really hit hard. I’m glad that you added Will and Emma to the story and the way you handled Carole, Burt, Hiram and LeRoy was excellent.

I’m not a big Klaine fan but I really liked the conversation they had when they were alone in the hospital room together, it was nice to see Kurt reminisce about both Finn and Rachel. I loved the news report you wrote and I liked how you added interviews with two random students who even though weren’t friends with Finn and Rachel were still touched by them, it really showed how much they meant to the school and student body.

The funeral scene was so sad but so well written, I love how you gave an insight on what each of their friends was thinking. As a massive Kartie fan I love the cute interaction you gave them, it was sweet and showed their love and support for one another despite the circumstances. As someone in a wheelchair I love how Artie offered his support to both Jake and Marley since he knows what they are now going through. As soon as I read that Jake and Marley were going to be paralysed I was hoping for a scene like this so I’m extremely happy that you delivered. I wasn’t expecting to see Beth at the funeral but her scene was very cute. The speeches were great and I really wanted to give Kurt a big hug after he got up to speak, he was so brave. I like how you brought back Lauren, Matt, Holly and April but it would have been nice if you included them earlier in the funeral scene. I wish they all returned for the tribute episode along with Quinn, Brittany, Rory, Sugar and Joe.

Last chapter and I think you rounded off this story the way it deserved to be finished. I love how nobody forgot Finn and Rachel, I surprisingly like how they never won Nationals again but most importantly I love how everybody came back to Lima for the 10 year death anniversary. I wasn’t sure how I felt about Kurt and Blaine naming their children after Finn and Rachel as there could only ever be one Finn Hudson and one Rachel Berry, I perhaps would’ve just used it as their middle names but as I kept reading I realised that it was perfect. You created Fin and Rachael perfectly and I’m glad you changed the spelling of their names. I love most of the endgames you used in this story especially Artie and Kitty. Joe and Unique were a massive shock and I thought you would’ve paired Ryder with Marissa instead of creating a new character but it was nice to see them all get a happy ending. I wish the other characters spoke more at the reunion and I wish you gave us a bit more insight to where everyone was at other than just being married or engaged but all in all it was a perfect ending to a beautiful story. To cap it off Seasons of Love was the perfect song choice to end the story, did you choose to include this song in before The Quarterback or afterwards?

Overall a wonderfully written story which gave the real tribute episode a run for its money but taking into consideration time constraints and the real emotions of the real cast it’s completely understandable. Thank you so much for sharing your story and I look forward to reading some of your other stories in the future. I know that you’re main focus is on Finchel but if you could please add a side serving of Kartie to each of your stories in the future like you did here that’d be awesome.

Sorry for the super long review, since I found this late I thought it would be best to do one long review instead of spamming you with 4 smaller ones.
10/28/2014 c4 22WildeAbrams
Such a sad story, but you tell it well. I would have liked more from the other characters perspectives though.
9/23/2014 c4 CarvieCamfia
Pls could u do a sequel about Quinn n puck having their baby n that pls xxxxx
3/18/2014 c4 lulu1954
This was so hard to read but written very well. Tonight's Glee episode was so good and it reminded me of the first few seasons. I miss Finn so much! Just not the same without him!
11/14/2013 c4 189Softrock-showtunesgirlscout22
Awww this was really sweet! Loved it! Though it was incredibly heartbreaking to read
11/14/2013 c1 Softrock-showtunesgirlscout22
Oh my god! Finchel is dead aren't they? I think I'm gonna throw up...
11/6/2013 c4 1GleekMomma
As heartbreaking as this is, I think this would've been a good way for glee to have ended in the wake of Cory's death. Yes, it would have put Lea out of a job, but I like how if they had to die, they died together and in love. Fantastic writing.
11/5/2013 c4 Guest
Good story thanks
10/30/2013 c4 11Fire Girl125
This was so beautiful! I mean really beautiful! It was sad but so beautiful! I can't stop saying 'beautiful' :)
10/30/2013 c4 RAGML
It was so sweet of Klaine to name their twins in honor of Finchel.. Ugh! This story is just bittersweet. It's sweet that the alumni had a get together. Perfect ending.
Good job as usual!
10/28/2013 c4 3nandi12896
Well written story! Well done, I enjoyed it a lot.
10/27/2013 c4 noro
wonderful ending
10/27/2013 c4 3Diamondgirl3
Oh my god! First... Well EVERYTHING! Then you throw RENT into the mix and... I can't even.
I am crying, and I don't often cry while reading (unless it's game of thrones). I am way too emotional right now, especially because I've been watching a glee marathon since last night on Netflix.
I CAN'T wait for what you write next, so please keep writing your amazing work!
*Finchel
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