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11/3/2017 c1 2General Viper
Great story but lots of errors that need to be fixed
6/25/2017 c1 Guest
When you can't even write the summery correctly. 10/10
8/3/2015 c1 BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
THIS SUCKS DIE BITCH
8/4/2014 c1 2Titus Silverstone
its a lil short but i like it
12/21/2013 c1 13Velvet D'Coolette
Another interesting short story, here. You make it very clear that Tails is upset and launch straight into the main situation your story revolves around. I've always preferred stories that get on with it.

The ending is very cute!

One thing I might suggest to improve this story is to give the summary a second look. A well-written summary can really attract potential readers so capitalising names, spellchecking and putting commas where they are needed can make a big difference!

I'm also a little confused about what this sentence means: "He since she is worried about him."

Other than that, once again - good work!
10/15/2013 c1 anonymousxxsedfrds325r
how cute pedophilia.

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