for Warm and fuzzy feelings6/25/2017 c1 Guest
When you can't even write the summery correctly. 10/10
When you can't even write the summery correctly. 10/10
8/3/2015 c1 BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
THIS SUCKS DIE BITCH
THIS SUCKS DIE BITCH
12/21/2013 c1 
13Velvet D'Coolette
Another interesting short story, here. You make it very clear that Tails is upset and launch straight into the main situation your story revolves around. I've always preferred stories that get on with it.
The ending is very cute!
One thing I might suggest to improve this story is to give the summary a second look. A well-written summary can really attract potential readers so capitalising names, spellchecking and putting commas where they are needed can make a big difference!
I'm also a little confused about what this sentence means: "He since she is worried about him."
Other than that, once again - good work!
13Velvet D'CooletteAnother interesting short story, here. You make it very clear that Tails is upset and launch straight into the main situation your story revolves around. I've always preferred stories that get on with it.
The ending is very cute!
One thing I might suggest to improve this story is to give the summary a second look. A well-written summary can really attract potential readers so capitalising names, spellchecking and putting commas where they are needed can make a big difference!
I'm also a little confused about what this sentence means: "He since she is worried about him."
Other than that, once again - good work!