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11AUehara
Aw, man! I so want to see Hikari snapping at Takeru and the at Micheal. I can only imagine it being hilarious! Hikari being a jelous girlfriend, that is a pretty amusing idea!
.Atsuko Uehara
11AUeharaAw, man! I so want to see Hikari snapping at Takeru and the at Micheal. I can only imagine it being hilarious! Hikari being a jelous girlfriend, that is a pretty amusing idea!
.Atsuko Uehara
8/31/2014 c2 33Lilly The Omega Wolf
I hope this will see an update, cause its a fun story.
I defiantly enjoyed both chapters. TK needs a good talking to :)
33Lilly The Omega WolfI hope this will see an update, cause its a fun story.
I defiantly enjoyed both chapters. TK needs a good talking to :)
8/30/2014 c1 Lilly The Omega Wolf
So far, this story as been hilarious and I'm glad I've found your user page on here :)
As a long time Tk/Kari shipper, Im not sure how much I'll enjoy next chapter, however.. since it has been very funny so far, I'll have to keep reading. ...in the morning. Its really late right now. I'll read and review the rest of the story then.
So far, this story as been hilarious and I'm glad I've found your user page on here :)
As a long time Tk/Kari shipper, Im not sure how much I'll enjoy next chapter, however.. since it has been very funny so far, I'll have to keep reading. ...in the morning. Its really late right now. I'll read and review the rest of the story then.
6/3/2014 c2 7Blonde-Eko
Oh I hope you'll continue with this as its hilarious. Death glare Hikari is a pretty fun character to read and I think you wrote Takeru's obliviousness very well. The warning of the other digidestined before the two left for their movie was great and in the first chapter I liked Miyako's reaction to Hikari's paranoia :D
Great story! Considering the characters you were given in the challenge, I'm impressed with how you pulled it off (even if you had to make Hikari very OOC). I have no idea what on earth I'd have done with those two so way to go.
7Blonde-EkoOh I hope you'll continue with this as its hilarious. Death glare Hikari is a pretty fun character to read and I think you wrote Takeru's obliviousness very well. The warning of the other digidestined before the two left for their movie was great and in the first chapter I liked Miyako's reaction to Hikari's paranoia :D
Great story! Considering the characters you were given in the challenge, I'm impressed with how you pulled it off (even if you had to make Hikari very OOC). I have no idea what on earth I'd have done with those two so way to go.
1/15/2014 c2 Guest
Yeah...giving the same closeness with a gay-friend is like being this close to another girl while in a relationship- noooot good. I can understand Hikari , poor her. But why do they have to go in soo much detail about bodies and such D: don't michael, you were always so innocent to me...until now D: .
Yeah...giving the same closeness with a gay-friend is like being this close to another girl while in a relationship- noooot good. I can understand Hikari , poor her. But why do they have to go in soo much detail about bodies and such D: don't michael, you were always so innocent to me...until now D: .
11/21/2013 c2 24SharpeBB
Wow, I absolutely LOVE the jealousy in this. Even though it's not typical of Hikari, you've made it very believable!
I can't wait for more!
24SharpeBBWow, I absolutely LOVE the jealousy in this. Even though it's not typical of Hikari, you've made it very believable!
I can't wait for more!
11/18/2013 c2 39the alpha phoenix
I'd hate to be Takeru at that moment ... on the receiving end of Hikari's wrath. I hope he survived her anger and lived to tell the tale lol. It's a good job that looks don't kill. I wonder what Hikari is going to say to Michael in the next chapter. Please update soon so I can find out.
39the alpha phoenixI'd hate to be Takeru at that moment ... on the receiving end of Hikari's wrath. I hope he survived her anger and lived to tell the tale lol. It's a good job that looks don't kill. I wonder what Hikari is going to say to Michael in the next chapter. Please update soon so I can find out.
11/12/2013 c2 85Kal-El Fornia
Out of character, jealous, and about to murder someone Hikari is simply a delight. Poor oblivious Takeru. Open your eyes and see that your girlfriend is about to slaughter someone!
Also, Michael blatantly checking out Takeru? Lmao, yeah, Hikari has reason to be on the hunt.
85Kal-El ForniaOut of character, jealous, and about to murder someone Hikari is simply a delight. Poor oblivious Takeru. Open your eyes and see that your girlfriend is about to slaughter someone!
Also, Michael blatantly checking out Takeru? Lmao, yeah, Hikari has reason to be on the hunt.
11/11/2013 c2 15AmiraStarr
I really liked this chapter. I kept imagining what Hikari's stare must have looked like lol. It is nice to read something more lighthearted from you. I really enjoy your 'Comfortable Silence' story, but this is a nice break and a chance to laugh instead of fretting for Hikari's safety. Keep up the good work hun!
15AmiraStarrI really liked this chapter. I kept imagining what Hikari's stare must have looked like lol. It is nice to read something more lighthearted from you. I really enjoy your 'Comfortable Silence' story, but this is a nice break and a chance to laugh instead of fretting for Hikari's safety. Keep up the good work hun!
11/11/2013 c2 NegaiKoumi
Nice chap Good Read...I hope you update soon Koumi Out Kuz...
Nice chap Good Read...I hope you update soon Koumi Out Kuz...
11/11/2013 c2 21Moonlight Serenity
Jealous Hikari is cracking me up. Seriously. She is dangerous right now. Really looking forward to the next chapter!
21Moonlight SerenityJealous Hikari is cracking me up. Seriously. She is dangerous right now. Really looking forward to the next chapter!