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2AudreyyyRoseeee
Please write more! It doesn't have to be about vacation...
it could be from when they're all older of something! how 'boutsa love triangle?
2AudreyyyRoseeeePlease write more! It doesn't have to be about vacation...
it could be from when they're all older of something! how 'boutsa love triangle?
2/24/2014 c1 14Nightstar Phoenix
My impression of Beckett was a little more patient than he appeared to be in this fanfic, but then again, he was five in the last book.
Otherwise? YES. THIS IS AMAZING. KEEP GOING!
14Nightstar PhoenixMy impression of Beckett was a little more patient than he appeared to be in this fanfic, but then again, he was five in the last book.
Otherwise? YES. THIS IS AMAZING. KEEP GOING!
10/29/2013 c1 44Lefty
Awesome! By the way, I looked up "balatron" and apparently it is a synonym for "clown". Also, isn't sodium chloride basically just salt? If it is, how would salt cause an explosion?
Awesome! By the way, I looked up "balatron" and apparently it is a synonym for "clown". Also, isn't sodium chloride basically just salt? If it is, how would salt cause an explosion?
10/26/2013 c1 Hi
Update please.
Pretty please
NO CROSSING ARTEMIS FOWL, IF U DO, U DIE!
MWHAHAHA
(Yup, still same hi, but only bcuz I like ur stories)
So, what did Myles find out when he followed the great and powerful-pause for dramatic effect- ARTEMIS FOWL ;}
Update please.
Pretty please
NO CROSSING ARTEMIS FOWL, IF U DO, U DIE!
MWHAHAHA
(Yup, still same hi, but only bcuz I like ur stories)
So, what did Myles find out when he followed the great and powerful-pause for dramatic effect- ARTEMIS FOWL ;}
10/18/2013 c1 Guest
Wow. This is … HILARIOUS! I love Beckett's character, since we only get to see him as a toddler in the books. He reminds me of Juliet Butler. Great start!
:) daenerys_bella_girl
Wow. This is … HILARIOUS! I love Beckett's character, since we only get to see him as a toddler in the books. He reminds me of Juliet Butler. Great start!
:) daenerys_bella_girl
10/14/2013 c1 Guest
Forgot to mention, Myles favorite stuff toy was a monkey called Professor Primate. He hasn't played with that toy since the Time Paradox (when Artemis ruined it trying to stop Opal). Another, annoy, OOCness is the way you have Myles acting, If Myles wanted his toy back, he would have come up with a plan, a humiliating one for his brother (or brothers) no doubt, to get it back. You have to remember that Myles is called the mini-Artemis for a reason, and the way he acts in the last book, he is not a person to be messed with either. He may just top Artemis as he gets older, no doubt.
So this little description of Myles is not only pathetic, but completely out of character for the older twin. Also, they are not identical in appearance. Myles has black hair, which has been mentioned in the last book (if you even bothered to read it) while Beckett, the hyper one (who probably would act like Percy Jackson when he got older), has blonde curls.
Learn your characters, also, or else the story falls flat on its face.
Forgot to mention, Myles favorite stuff toy was a monkey called Professor Primate. He hasn't played with that toy since the Time Paradox (when Artemis ruined it trying to stop Opal). Another, annoy, OOCness is the way you have Myles acting, If Myles wanted his toy back, he would have come up with a plan, a humiliating one for his brother (or brothers) no doubt, to get it back. You have to remember that Myles is called the mini-Artemis for a reason, and the way he acts in the last book, he is not a person to be messed with either. He may just top Artemis as he gets older, no doubt.
So this little description of Myles is not only pathetic, but completely out of character for the older twin. Also, they are not identical in appearance. Myles has black hair, which has been mentioned in the last book (if you even bothered to read it) while Beckett, the hyper one (who probably would act like Percy Jackson when he got older), has blonde curls.
Learn your characters, also, or else the story falls flat on its face.
10/14/2013 c1 Guest
Uh.. You are aware that Artemis Fowl's little brother, Myles, name is spelt with a 'y' and not an 'i'. Learn your spelling!
Uh.. You are aware that Artemis Fowl's little brother, Myles, name is spelt with a 'y' and not an 'i'. Learn your spelling!