for In the Quiet Spaces11/19/2017 c1 ThenChangeIt
This is so nicely written. Beautiful. Characters just so. And it's not that I don't like angst, but this "kitchen-sink" style of revealing character without big plot events, it's harder to write. Smashing.
This is so nicely written. Beautiful. Characters just so. And it's not that I don't like angst, but this "kitchen-sink" style of revealing character without big plot events, it's harder to write. Smashing.
1/26/2014 c1 
1My Yellow Dragon
Okay so I really liked the beginning of the story but, then in my opinion it started going down hill around the middle/ end of the story.
1My Yellow DragonOkay so I really liked the beginning of the story but, then in my opinion it started going down hill around the middle/ end of the story.
10/14/2013 c1 9NightStar28
Great character work, loved how everyone's voices sounded authentic, and such a sexy, but still homey and comfortable the scene was.
9NightStar28Great character work, loved how everyone's voices sounded authentic, and such a sexy, but still homey and comfortable the scene was.
10/14/2013 c1 tigerlilyschild
Loved it. I like these three together anyway but this story is especially sweet. Please write more.
Lisette
Loved it. I like these three together anyway but this story is especially sweet. Please write more.
Lisette
10/13/2013 c1 Guest
Beautiful!it make me hungry!
Beautiful!it make me hungry!