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12/29/2015 c16 yuki dreyar
please update soon:)
4/29/2015 c1 2Justinfever
Nice first chapter. Keep up the good work and continue to build your writing skills.
2/27/2014 c16 Guest
More pretty please
1/17/2014 c1 pretty daffodils
Also btw the 'a Gaara love story' is kinda unnecessary in the title :) The first part is fine though!
1/17/2014 c16 pretty daffodils
Hey there. This is a long time listener first time caller kinda thing lol. I really enjoy your story and I've noticed an improvement from the beginning until this post! Good job. Just letting you know there are a few punctuation errors (little things like that annoy me, haha, sorry) throughout your chapters but I'm sure you'll work on that issue :) Also I would advise that you use some commas when people are speaking instead of so many full stops. Awesome chapter despite those errors though.

xx
1/8/2014 c16 44mr grimjaw
this is so good
1/6/2014 c15 mr grimjaw
this was good i liked it !
12/30/2013 c14 mr grimjaw
this is so good!
12/30/2013 c13 mr grimjaw
this was epic
12/30/2013 c12 mr grimjaw
this is very good
12/30/2013 c11 mr grimjaw
great chapter
12/9/2013 c14 Inanari
Luv it
Where's next chapter?
12/6/2013 c14 3Blunt shards of glass
up-date soon!
12/6/2013 c10 44mr grimjaw
good chap
12/6/2013 c9 mr grimjaw
the fic is getting better
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