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5/28/2019 c44 153Linneagb
Awwwww. And now that ending with Ryan and Sandy... I couldn't help but laughing when it was about those words and Ryan would be grounded. It would be interesting to see a fic from you where he does end up calling Sandy that for some reason. Or just some when he ends up getting punished for something... I might write that one myself... Oh my God. Your stories are just perfection and everything I can't put into words. I love these stories.
5/28/2019 c43 Linneagb
How is it that you can get everything so perfect? Seth too. I know some people hate on him but... he's Seth! And he means well. Poor Marissa now too. But I don't like her so I wouldn't mind if you leave her out for the rest of the way, I just don't want that to hurt Ryan. Aw. That ending, finally. Only one chapter left.
5/28/2019 c42 Linneagb
Aw. Well that was just perfect as well. Ryan's just... I can't quite find the words. It's been hard for him with being the bigger person than his dad or Dawn or even Trey. It's so awesome that he finally has the way with doing it. I only have a couple of chapters of this now and I also have some other stories to get caught up on. But in some time I do have another sequel of this to get caught up in. And I can't wait for it.
5/28/2019 c41 Linneagb
I know I've said it before but I just love your writing and the way you can always bring some funny line into even the darkest of times. The scene with Kirsten and Caleb was just perfect. I do hope Caleb and nobody else will have the chance to take all of their money now so they'll be bankrupt. But then of course, no money could ever compare to what they've got...
5/28/2019 c40 Linneagb
YEAH! GO TREY! This was just perfect from your side. Caleb deserves this so badly and more to say the least. I loved how Ryan was almost forced to choose something to eat and then Sandy was the complete opposite. Trey and Caleb here should be interesting. There's not much left of this story now. I'm hoping to see some more of that...
5/28/2019 c39 Linneagb
I hope that car crash doesn't have anything to do with the Cohen's or anyone they know. It wouldn't surprise me if you put anything of that into this story too though XD. Finally I'm back to reading and I can finally finish this story with how little is left. Poor Ryan, at least he's starting to trust finally. And this is if Dawn stays sober and everything this time around...
5/27/2019 c38 Linneagb
Aw. If Dawn really meant it this time. And it seemed like she did. What a perfect add with that ornament. Did you have that planned from the start of the story or did it come to you at the right time?
5/27/2019 c37 Linneagb
Oh my gosh. And those rats... Poor, poor Ryan... I have to say I get Seth's reaction too. I'm not sure I'd react any differently even though I know some readers call him selfish and stuff. Great chapter... I just want to keep reading but for the last five chapters or so I need to do something else and I might not be able to read more until tomorrow... I'll be back.
5/27/2019 c36 Linneagb
Oh my my my. Poor Ryan. For everything he's in something just as bad or worse comes after. Dawn has always been the way she's acting now. I hope that at least she can find some sort of peace- as in the series. And can stop trying to blame the Cohen's for everything that's going on when it's actually Frank and Caleb and God knows how many others.
5/27/2019 c35 Linneagb
If Dawn was somewhat of the mother she should be she'd let Ryan nbe and feel grateful he isn't with her. But then of course. Dawn is... well, Dawn. And Seth... What's school in all of this? But everything's just placed exactly where it needs to be and I love this story and I love your writing.
5/27/2019 c34 Linneagb
Go Wanda go! But... Not that. But Dawn sure is... I can't find the right word. She just knows. And she just knew. And if she'd just known a little sooner. And now this ending and I'm happier than ever I have more to read all until the end of the story...
5/27/2019 c33 Linneagb
I just love how the different characters will say different things. And just act like themselves really. And it's once again heartbreaking. After all he's been through and now this Ryan just has to get better,
5/27/2019 c32 Linneagb
Naw. My heart is just breaking. I loved the beginning of the chapter. Seth and his parents must have another chance of showing Ryan what life could be. And Dawn... I just don't have any words for her. Now Trey, I just have to see his reaction to all of this and the ending... Oh my Gosh.
5/27/2019 c31 Linneagb
No. Not waiting, I hate waiting. But go Seth, GO! This should get someone to listen at least. Luke and Brad and Chip needs to pay for this. And no. No,nonono. This can't be the end of Ryan. Not now, he doesn't deserve this. He's just so precious...
5/27/2019 c30 Linneagb
Dawn... And I know how this looks and this is bad. This is all just a few hours and it must feel like a hundred years to Ryan and the others. I just have to keep reading. At least I have all the story until the end to read and don't need to wait after a cliffhanger.
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