for The Rage of the Sun12/14/2013 c3 
30strikerstories
Okay, another great chapter but I found a mistake. You say that Rapunzel is missing. But the lines "Then how did the dam?" Asked RAPUNZEL! She's gone, so you may want to change that to Amanda maybe. I am following this now. So you better update
30strikerstoriesOkay, another great chapter but I found a mistake. You say that Rapunzel is missing. But the lines "Then how did the dam?" Asked RAPUNZEL! She's gone, so you may want to change that to Amanda maybe. I am following this now. So you better update
12/14/2013 c2 strikerstories
Oh, what an interesting twist. I wonder what'll happen to the poor kidnapper.
Oh, what an interesting twist. I wonder what'll happen to the poor kidnapper.
12/14/2013 c1 strikerstories
Well you asked me to take time to read some of your stories and I am not dissapointed at all. I haven't read your full stories, but the recap and summary were good enough for me. This was very detailed and everyone was in character as far as canon ones go.
Well you asked me to take time to read some of your stories and I am not dissapointed at all. I haven't read your full stories, but the recap and summary were good enough for me. This was very detailed and everyone was in character as far as canon ones go.
11/2/2013 c3 41bStormhands
You have a very leisurely pace going on here. But a very nice chapter, plenty of foreshadowing.
41bStormhandsYou have a very leisurely pace going on here. But a very nice chapter, plenty of foreshadowing.
11/2/2013 c2 19Wolfram-and-Hart-Sauron
Wait, if we have to be afraid for the kidnapper... Oh no. PLEASE UPDATE!
19Wolfram-and-Hart-SauronWait, if we have to be afraid for the kidnapper... Oh no. PLEASE UPDATE!
11/1/2013 c2 41bStormhands
The king has already figured out what is going on, good, we need smart kings. Wondering if his sample is changing.
41bStormhandsThe king has already figured out what is going on, good, we need smart kings. Wondering if his sample is changing.
10/17/2013 c1 19Wolfram-and-Hart-Sauron
OK, I'm intrigued. This looks like it could be very interesting and more than a little creepy.
19Wolfram-and-Hart-SauronOK, I'm intrigued. This looks like it could be very interesting and more than a little creepy.