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5/19/2021 c4 52Taliesin The Eternal Bard
I don't know how you are with the English Language, but When you are referring to entire family It's always "'s" Show me careful of your tenses When you're write.
5/19/2021 c2 Taliesin The Eternal Bard
An interesting take on a story,And the less you said anything I would have never known you were Dyslexic
4/29/2021 c19 Yaplu2pseudo
Nice story. thanks for sharing with us.
1/9/2021 c19 Taliesin The Eternal Bard
Over all I like your story, the only two negatives I have with it are your getting your tenses mixed up, and you drifting between written and spoken language!
1/8/2021 c9 Taliesin The Eternal Bard
What I find rolling on the floor funny in this chapter is someone (her sister) giving Tanya a 1000 year old vampire the sex talk.
9/7/2020 c19 andrewpine
Love myself.
You really needed a beta to correct your terrible grammar and spelling.
9/7/2020 c18 andrewpine
Eddie has to be the stupidest vampire ever turned.
9/7/2020 c16 andrewpine
If there is is way too late for the idiot but Emmett needs to learn to shut the hell up.
Didn't tell them.
Talking to the woman.
He was on the take his head of throw it to out the window with his body. What in the he'll does that even mean?
Made sure.
The word is tell not told.
Wear.
It is here not here. seriously?
Burn not burned.
Quiet not quite.
Woke up.
Imprint not imprinted.
It didn't help at all that you edited the story .
9/7/2020 c14 andrewpine
Put my hands.
Will this finally open up the eye of those
four idiots and make them believe her when she
tells them the truth?
Woke up.
I wish one of these times someone would put his head in backwards.
Because.
Do those idiot not understand that it he forced her to come back to them to sooner or later she would be completely turned and would kill him then the parental units?
Deny. She had.
I have no problem with her being in the story ,but since it is finished she either is or isn't in it.
9/7/2020 c13 andrewpine
Find on your own.
Maybe she needs to remove body parts from that asshole Carlisle.
Smelled like sex.
Did Bella remove his head of did Vicky finally show up to get her revenge?
9/7/2020 c12 andrewpine
Necessary...
I knew that asshole would try to pull some crap when it came to Bella
So why are they there and how did they know she was there. was it a weak minded Emmett that gave it up?
Whether taught.
Shame she hasn't change more she could really do more damage to the prick.
They just have no idea when to quit and cut their loses do they.
9/7/2020 c11 andrewpine
Any more.
Why is she not changing more?
Physically.
Anything else.
9/7/2020 c10 andrewpine
You guys taught me.
She is still too wishy washy when it comes to forgiving people that have a fewer her over.
9/7/2020 c10 andrewpine
Built this.
To not cause.
You will be happy.
Rose does not seem to be as hateful
towards Bella as she was when she was with fairy boy.
Want to be dependent
. regardless.
I think she is doing the same.
Ever listened.
I do not know.
About time those two decided to get out from that depressing coven.
Carlisle turned all three of them but only seems to care for his true mate Eddie.
Want to touch me.
Lose. things.
I doubt very . ugh if she would be this disorganized it is not in her nature,she hates clutter.
9/7/2020 c9 andrewpine
Breath from kissing.
From kissing her.
Breaks.
Will use.
Well what is she going to do now? I am surprised that Rose didn't smell her.
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