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10/26/2014 c1 5The Patchwork Rabbit
Interesting. Maybe it should be sadder? Oh well, It's fine as is!
12/27/2013 c2 1Antoninsh
i cant wait for the next chapters! _
11/21/2013 c2 6regulusgal
It's a really good idea to have Kyoko's life not revolving only around acting. You manage to show that she's also an ordinary girl.

A bit surprised to see that the setting is in LA, but never mind.

Some grammars need to be fixed here and there. Otherthan that, you've done a good job so far.
11/3/2013 c2 muchachomomo
This is really good. And DAMN KYOKO CAN DUNK?! Hella perfect, I swear.
11/2/2013 c2 shatto
I like this story
good job
11/1/2013 c2 3Yuki Urahimi
Good morning or evening. One thing i must say. WHY DO YOU LEAVE IT AT THAT POINT. WAAAAAAAAAAA, EVIL EVIL EVIL! me liked the chapter and story o far writ more. adne more and more. k that it for now.
10/31/2013 c2 Guest
can't wait for the next
10/19/2013 c1 Guest
Good job
10/18/2013 c1 misao97
Hmmmm i really like it so far! Very nice idea! And it's also nice to see kyoko not obsessed with job! I can't wait to read more! Gambatte
10/17/2013 c1 3CabaretHotSauce
That was beautifull and i loved the story and how u added a few things. I can't wait to see the way you will introduce ren/kuon.

Criticism wise, hmmm... I would say putting in a few descriptive things would be nice like going into a little bit more detail on her emotions and not skimming over them.

Though I've got to say PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON for example once u read this haha

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