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11/1/2013 c1 Kiana3Caballos
That was good, you know how to make intelligent, but understandable sentences. I like the use of the younger brother.
10/24/2013 c1 Guest
can u please make this a story?
10/18/2013 c1 Differentbutuniq
Love it, the idea and the writing.
Only constructive criticism I can give is please use "..." So yeah it'd be cool if you did more, I'd read it anyway
10/18/2013 c1 2arosequartz
Okay you have to make this a story period!
10/18/2013 c1 Brokenflower18
Will you continue this? It's really good.

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