for The Legacy5/28 c86 Lunask
What a beautifully written story!
Found this gem more than a decade after its start. Thanks to the writer for such a wonderful story with marvelously crafted characters. The character arc of Daphne , Harry and yes even Pansy was so good.
What a beautifully written story!
Found this gem more than a decade after its start. Thanks to the writer for such a wonderful story with marvelously crafted characters. The character arc of Daphne , Harry and yes even Pansy was so good.
4/21 c1 Guest
Trop de bavardages inutile et encombrant rendant l'histoire lassant
Trop de bavardages inutile et encombrant rendant l'histoire lassant
4/21 c86 TyDM
Jumped to the end after reading the first 35 chapters and I’m really disappointed that Harry is still married to the wretch Daphne. There is no logical universe where Harry has the spine to stand up to Voldemort, but puts up with her nonsense.
The entire premise of Harry sacrificing himself for a bigoted Slytherin who drops words like “moodblood” “blood traitor” and clearly thinks he is a dumb unattractive ignoramus… silly. Painful to read honestly (hence me skipping half the story).
Writing style was decent, however.
Jumped to the end after reading the first 35 chapters and I’m really disappointed that Harry is still married to the wretch Daphne. There is no logical universe where Harry has the spine to stand up to Voldemort, but puts up with her nonsense.
The entire premise of Harry sacrificing himself for a bigoted Slytherin who drops words like “moodblood” “blood traitor” and clearly thinks he is a dumb unattractive ignoramus… silly. Painful to read honestly (hence me skipping half the story).
Writing style was decent, however.
4/20 c19 TyDM
Ch 19… Daph is simply a vile person. Totally self-centered. Why are we readers supposed to care about her? Also, I hate watching Harry be such a passive chump punching-bag. I’m ready for the power-up arc already, please!
Ch 19… Daph is simply a vile person. Totally self-centered. Why are we readers supposed to care about her? Also, I hate watching Harry be such a passive chump punching-bag. I’m ready for the power-up arc already, please!
3/22 c13 Guest
Since he donated from the Black vault he became head of house, surely he becomes head of house Potter now since the marriage contract is now active.
Since he donated from the Black vault he became head of house, surely he becomes head of house Potter now since the marriage contract is now active.
3/22 c12 Guest
This ending Part of the chapter makes no sense, why is Harry demanding more money?
He thinks he's going to die, He has a saviour complex, He doesn't care about money, And any reason to annoy Malfoy he does it for fun. So their is no logic to him asking for more money
This ending Part of the chapter makes no sense, why is Harry demanding more money?
He thinks he's going to die, He has a saviour complex, He doesn't care about money, And any reason to annoy Malfoy he does it for fun. So their is no logic to him asking for more money
3/22 c4 Guest
Why can't he loan her the money with as the Potter family
Why can't he loan her the money with as the Potter family
3/19 c45 AndySerri
First action in 350k words and it's a training session, like when are we gonna see all of this against actual enemies? Why use stupid assassination tactics instead of fighting using everything you've said Harry's learned so far? It's like you never heard of the concept of Chekov's gun. You have great grammar but your characters are annoying, you choose the worst possible ways to handle situations and you deprive your readers of the satisfaction of seeing the bad guys actually suffering from their actions. It's so disappointing to read a story for this long and have it just not go anywhere. I'm done.
First action in 350k words and it's a training session, like when are we gonna see all of this against actual enemies? Why use stupid assassination tactics instead of fighting using everything you've said Harry's learned so far? It's like you never heard of the concept of Chekov's gun. You have great grammar but your characters are annoying, you choose the worst possible ways to handle situations and you deprive your readers of the satisfaction of seeing the bad guys actually suffering from their actions. It's so disappointing to read a story for this long and have it just not go anywhere. I'm done.
3/19 c41 AndySerri
Ugh, is there ever gonna be any action or is he gonna kill all of them by using some underhanded assassination tactis that are more boring than anything?
Ugh, is there ever gonna be any action or is he gonna kill all of them by using some underhanded assassination tactis that are more boring than anything?
3/19 c40 AndySerri
All this time waiting for some action and you make it as boring as humanly possible. Why?
All this time waiting for some action and you make it as boring as humanly possible. Why?
3/18 c19 AndySerri
How is there no accountability to Snape acting like this? This is way beyond just taking points and saying words.
How is there no accountability to Snape acting like this? This is way beyond just taking points and saying words.