
1/12/2014 c2 Sergeant Micheal
This is a amazing story. Keep writing I need to know more what happened to the pilot what happens to the marines. Must be more
This is a amazing story. Keep writing I need to know more what happened to the pilot what happens to the marines. Must be more
1/11/2014 c2 Augustus Arc
Hey great story but could you perhaps space inbetween lines so its easier to read. Thanks
Hey great story but could you perhaps space inbetween lines so its easier to read. Thanks
10/20/2013 c1 ultimate idiot
tyler tyler tyler tyler. all i can see is tyler in bold. it is very distracting.
tyler tyler tyler tyler. all i can see is tyler in bold. it is very distracting.
10/19/2013 c1 headreviewer mk2
finally someone made a story in a new perspective the whole ground troop view is getting old and tatterd im interested in how this will develope and if it catches on i have you to thank for that
finally someone made a story in a new perspective the whole ground troop view is getting old and tatterd im interested in how this will develope and if it catches on i have you to thank for that