for Arthur's Return12/23/2024 c1 Ama Beck
I thought your story was fantastic! The characters are really well developed, and the plot is really captivating. I genuinely think it has a lot of potential for visualization, and I would really like to turn it into a comic. I hope working on it in this format is okay with you.
Contact info:
Discord: bunnylicious02
best, regard
Ama Beck
I thought your story was fantastic! The characters are really well developed, and the plot is really captivating. I genuinely think it has a lot of potential for visualization, and I would really like to turn it into a comic. I hope working on it in this format is okay with you.
Contact info:
Discord: bunnylicious02
best, regard
Ama Beck
4/20/2024 c16 MaisaRamos
OechsnerC, are you still active?
OechsnerC, are you still active?
12/19/2023 c16 MaisaRamos
Is it still active? Will you continue the fanfic?
Is it still active? Will you continue the fanfic?
11/24/2023 c16 MaisaRamos
It's been two years... you're still active, are you?
It's been two years... you're still active, are you?
11/16/2023 c16 MaisaRamos
There is nothing in this chapter. You will continue the story, won't you?
There is nothing in this chapter. You will continue the story, won't you?
11/16/2023 c15 MaisaRamos
Are they seventeen? If I'm not mistaken, I had seen another age at the beginning.
Are they seventeen? If I'm not mistaken, I had seen another age at the beginning.
11/16/2023 c14 MaisaRamos
One curious thing I would like to know... is her belly a little big or not?
One curious thing I would like to know... is her belly a little big or not?
11/16/2023 c13 MaisaRamos
In that part that says they will be immortal, is it that they will live forever? Or just that they won't die because of their abilities, like in the case of Arthur, who healed himself with the sword of power when he was injured? Because in the part that says that they will live longer and age more slowly, it implies that they will die, but they will only live longer and age slowly. I thought that the question of immortality would only be for the couple where the minimoy or the human had the sword of power, because of the part that talks about the sword while the question of slowly aging was only for the other humans. However, from what I saw, the sword part is linked to the previous part, where it says that they will live longer, because after this part that talks about the changes in the couple's body, then it ends up saying that the couple would have special abilities, but when it talks about the sword of power, it implies that these abilities would only be the couple where one of the two has the sword of power, and as this part is linked to the part that says they will age slowly, I assumed that All of this specifically would only be for the couple who possess the sword of power. And since the part says that they will live longer, implying that they will die, but that they will live longer, I thought that maybe this immortality would be just to not die, using their abilities to heal themselves or something, like that like Arthur did. But is that really what I understood or will they really become immortal, literally? Where will they practically live forever?
In that part that says they will be immortal, is it that they will live forever? Or just that they won't die because of their abilities, like in the case of Arthur, who healed himself with the sword of power when he was injured? Because in the part that says that they will live longer and age more slowly, it implies that they will die, but they will only live longer and age slowly. I thought that the question of immortality would only be for the couple where the minimoy or the human had the sword of power, because of the part that talks about the sword while the question of slowly aging was only for the other humans. However, from what I saw, the sword part is linked to the previous part, where it says that they will live longer, because after this part that talks about the changes in the couple's body, then it ends up saying that the couple would have special abilities, but when it talks about the sword of power, it implies that these abilities would only be the couple where one of the two has the sword of power, and as this part is linked to the part that says they will age slowly, I assumed that All of this specifically would only be for the couple who possess the sword of power. And since the part says that they will live longer, implying that they will die, but that they will live longer, I thought that maybe this immortality would be just to not die, using their abilities to heal themselves or something, like that like Arthur did. But is that really what I understood or will they really become immortal, literally? Where will they practically live forever?
11/16/2023 c11 MaisaRamos
Wait a minute. In the previous chapter, if I'm not mistaken, Chief Bogo had said that Arquibldo had discovered that the full moon of any month could be used, both to go and to return. So that means they wouldn't need to come back two days later when the portal opened, as it would already be open as long as it was a full moon. Or could only a full moon of any month be chosen? Or is this valid for all moons, that is, all full moons can be used to go back and forth, regardless of the month, as long as it was a full moon?
Wait a minute. In the previous chapter, if I'm not mistaken, Chief Bogo had said that Arquibldo had discovered that the full moon of any month could be used, both to go and to return. So that means they wouldn't need to come back two days later when the portal opened, as it would already be open as long as it was a full moon. Or could only a full moon of any month be chosen? Or is this valid for all moons, that is, all full moons can be used to go back and forth, regardless of the month, as long as it was a full moon?
11/15/2023 c6 MaisaRamos
I just wanted to understand if that power with the sword is Selenia's powers or is it the powers of the sword...
I just wanted to understand if that power with the sword is Selenia's powers or is it the powers of the sword...
11/15/2023 c5 MaisaRamos
I've seen that the books talk about powers, but as far as I remember, there's nothing fake about magic. And in the books it doesn't even say exactly what kind of power that would be, it just says that she passed on the powers. But I kind of speculate that it is the power to govern, because of the explanation she had given about marriage before having that whole thing with the spider, where she says, if I'm not mistaken, that whoever she chooses, besides from husband, he would become the king and he would be respected by the seven kingdoms, something more or less like that. And after that kiss I had a certain impression that Arthur became, in a certain way, a little more commanding, as if he were a king. Until now I remember the scene in the third book, where everyone was desperate because Maltazard was with Selenia and Arthur told everyone to be quiet... and that's why I guess it would be the power to govern, to be a king or to act like one.
I've seen that the books talk about powers, but as far as I remember, there's nothing fake about magic. And in the books it doesn't even say exactly what kind of power that would be, it just says that she passed on the powers. But I kind of speculate that it is the power to govern, because of the explanation she had given about marriage before having that whole thing with the spider, where she says, if I'm not mistaken, that whoever she chooses, besides from husband, he would become the king and he would be respected by the seven kingdoms, something more or less like that. And after that kiss I had a certain impression that Arthur became, in a certain way, a little more commanding, as if he were a king. Until now I remember the scene in the third book, where everyone was desperate because Maltazard was with Selenia and Arthur told everyone to be quiet... and that's why I guess it would be the power to govern, to be a king or to act like one.
4/12/2022 c15 Andromeda20001
In the head is 16 chapters, but I was very sad when I called up chapter 16 and there was nothing to read.
Please be a dear Easter bunny and treat us to a greeting Easter egg with an even bigger chapter.
In the head is 16 chapters, but I was very sad when I called up chapter 16 and there was nothing to read.
Please be a dear Easter bunny and treat us to a greeting Easter egg with an even bigger chapter.
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