for Firsts7/16 c48 
2valdeznation
“i want to go out in a blaze of glory” u already went out in a blaze of glory fucking headass… just a deeply unserious individual omg leo valdez u will always be famous
THEYRE SO SILLY GRAGHRBRBBEBRFGGRHTTUGNGKRTHFG
2valdeznation“i want to go out in a blaze of glory” u already went out in a blaze of glory fucking headass… just a deeply unserious individual omg leo valdez u will always be famous
THEYRE SO SILLY GRAGHRBRBBEBRFGGRHTTUGNGKRTHFG
7/16 c47 valdeznation
BROOOOOOO I CANT BELIEVE UR BACK I READ THIS FIC WHEN I WAS 13 AND NOW IM TURNING 18 AND UGHHHH THIS IS SO FULL CIRCLE HI DUDE OMG! this is THE fic that got me fully into leo and pjo, u literally changed my life also uhhhh CONGRATS ON THE BACHELOR DEGREE?(!)!?( i found a note in my notes app that said like holy shit im reading this caleo fic called firsts and its so cute but op hasnt updated and im miserable and OP UPDATED! bless u man theyre so silly u write them SO good welcome back u were sorely missed! all my fav leo authors are coming out of hibernation after forEVER im so hyped
BROOOOOOO I CANT BELIEVE UR BACK I READ THIS FIC WHEN I WAS 13 AND NOW IM TURNING 18 AND UGHHHH THIS IS SO FULL CIRCLE HI DUDE OMG! this is THE fic that got me fully into leo and pjo, u literally changed my life also uhhhh CONGRATS ON THE BACHELOR DEGREE?(!)!?( i found a note in my notes app that said like holy shit im reading this caleo fic called firsts and its so cute but op hasnt updated and im miserable and OP UPDATED! bless u man theyre so silly u write them SO good welcome back u were sorely missed! all my fav leo authors are coming out of hibernation after forEVER im so hyped
6/6 c53 Aespeciales
I'm sorry, but it doesn't feel like a great plan to me having Daisy acting as Calypso. Maybe if it was just for that day, it would work out? It's just, I feel like Mr D would be controlling her more closely just to spite them. But that's just me, don't mind me. Also, making him think he's separating Leo and Caplypso, now that's a good idea.
I'm loving your quest already. I would also be worried about Calypso going alone.
You really have all of them in character. I think that's what I love the most about your story.
Thank you so much for keeping writing this story.
I'm sorry, but it doesn't feel like a great plan to me having Daisy acting as Calypso. Maybe if it was just for that day, it would work out? It's just, I feel like Mr D would be controlling her more closely just to spite them. But that's just me, don't mind me. Also, making him think he's separating Leo and Caplypso, now that's a good idea.
I'm loving your quest already. I would also be worried about Calypso going alone.
You really have all of them in character. I think that's what I love the most about your story.
Thank you so much for keeping writing this story.
6/6 c52 Aespeciales
Leo was so unintencionally romantic here, just like in the books. I'm fallig in love with him all over again and it's your fault.
Leo was so unintencionally romantic here, just like in the books. I'm fallig in love with him all over again and it's your fault.
6/6 c50 Aespeciales
OMG! I loved it!
I was dying to know where the hell the sketch pad went. And to find it just because of Ketos was so on point.
I also like Calypso and Annabeth's interactions. They feel very natural and realistic, I don't know.
I'm so exited about the quest. You're making it all sound so intriguing. And having Calypso's mom there was genius.
Thank you! I'm gonna keep reading
OMG! I loved it!
I was dying to know where the hell the sketch pad went. And to find it just because of Ketos was so on point.
I also like Calypso and Annabeth's interactions. They feel very natural and realistic, I don't know.
I'm so exited about the quest. You're making it all sound so intriguing. And having Calypso's mom there was genius.
Thank you! I'm gonna keep reading
5/23 c49 Aespeciales
Loved everything about this chapter. From all the characters' interactions to Calypso's reflections, Leo's small insecurities and Festus.
Thank youuuu.
Loved everything about this chapter. From all the characters' interactions to Calypso's reflections, Leo's small insecurities and Festus.
Thank youuuu.
5/23 c48 Aespeciales
Hello from the ther siiiiiiide! hahaha
I really can't believe you updated again!
I laughed with this chapter, their shenanigans to retrive the briddle and their banter.
And I've always loved how you imagined Calypso's past, so I'm always interested in reaing more about it.
The sense of betrayal must have been so strong at first. But I find her not caring anymore even more sad. Ralistic and understable, but sad. So well done, because family is more often than not compicated.
Hello from the ther siiiiiiide! hahaha
I really can't believe you updated again!
I laughed with this chapter, their shenanigans to retrive the briddle and their banter.
And I've always loved how you imagined Calypso's past, so I'm always interested in reaing more about it.
The sense of betrayal must have been so strong at first. But I find her not caring anymore even more sad. Ralistic and understable, but sad. So well done, because family is more often than not compicated.
5/22 c18 Guest
Love this girl cannot wait for the next chapter
Love this girl cannot wait for the next chapter
5/20 c49 deegeetal
Holy shit, I can't believe this updated. Just so you know, I think you wrote the gold standard when it comes to Caleo stories. Good stuff!
Holy shit, I can't believe this updated. Just so you know, I think you wrote the gold standard when it comes to Caleo stories. Good stuff!
5/20 c48 Aespeciales
OMG! I can't believe you actually updateeeeed!
At first I didn't want to get my hopes up in case it was an author's note. But when I saw it was an actual chapter and not just that, but they were TWO! I was SO happy.
I feel bad for Leo and Calypso, they didn't get even one whole date for themselves.
I liked them trying to get to know more about the other, but it was realistic for them not to open up about EVERYTHING just like that.
THANK you sooo much for continuing the story. When I reread it sometimes I die of curiosity with all the strage things that Rachel drew and things she doesn't remember. But I always resigned myself to never knowing how anything would go down. Now I have hope of seeing resolved one day.
Thank you!
OMG! I can't believe you actually updateeeeed!
At first I didn't want to get my hopes up in case it was an author's note. But when I saw it was an actual chapter and not just that, but they were TWO! I was SO happy.
I feel bad for Leo and Calypso, they didn't get even one whole date for themselves.
I liked them trying to get to know more about the other, but it was realistic for them not to open up about EVERYTHING just like that.
THANK you sooo much for continuing the story. When I reread it sometimes I die of curiosity with all the strage things that Rachel drew and things she doesn't remember. But I always resigned myself to never knowing how anything would go down. Now I have hope of seeing resolved one day.
Thank you!
11/10/2023 c23 sof.f24
Hi there! ik that this fanfic was posted a looooong time ago, but I just found it and I love it SO MUCH! I wanted to share my appreciation, because, girl, your writing is AMAZING, and the plot/ story is SO GOOD I WANNA CRY I also loved how you keept things real, and gave us different timelines so we can see how their love grew
you're literally healing my inner child with this and I just wanted to thank you! ️
btw sorry for my english or any mistakes I've made, but I'm not a native speaker3
Hi there! ik that this fanfic was posted a looooong time ago, but I just found it and I love it SO MUCH! I wanted to share my appreciation, because, girl, your writing is AMAZING, and the plot/ story is SO GOOD I WANNA CRY I also loved how you keept things real, and gave us different timelines so we can see how their love grew
you're literally healing my inner child with this and I just wanted to thank you! ️
btw sorry for my english or any mistakes I've made, but I'm not a native speaker3
1/2/2023 c45 unknown
Plz type a new chapter... l am a big fan and can't wait to read more!
Plz type a new chapter... l am a big fan and can't wait to read more!
12/19/2022 c3 J
Hi! I like your idea and style pretty much, but is this a authors universe ? Since I had not read to much (three chapters to be exact). Because according to my memory (IDK if it’s wrong or right I read PJO and HOO a LONG time ago), Leo had been boomed in the air with Festus and they were sort of boomed to the island and Leo fixed Festus and they went back to camp.
Hi! I like your idea and style pretty much, but is this a authors universe ? Since I had not read to much (three chapters to be exact). Because according to my memory (IDK if it’s wrong or right I read PJO and HOO a LONG time ago), Leo had been boomed in the air with Festus and they were sort of boomed to the island and Leo fixed Festus and they went back to camp.