11/1/2023 c1 AzOwO
Tbh the kiss at the end was a little unexpected, but nobody was out of character! This is awesome! Thank you for writing this!
Tbh the kiss at the end was a little unexpected, but nobody was out of character! This is awesome! Thank you for writing this!
4/23/2020 c1 Guest
Teeter
Teeter
2/9/2019 c1 Hela
OH God.
OH God.
3/19/2017 c1 DaughterofAthena
Plz write more. I luuuuuvvvv it
Plz write more. I luuuuuvvvv it
12/22/2016 c1 risa
please continue this i love perico and i really think this could be an awesome story
please continue this i love perico and i really think this could be an awesome story
4/8/2015 c1 3thekspecialty
WOW! You're amazing! This was beautifully written! I really just want to wrap Nico in a hug, screw the fact that he's not a fan of physical contact. People need hugs and Nico needs them more than anyone. Rick should write another little story where Nico finally finds someone.
WOW! You're amazing! This was beautifully written! I really just want to wrap Nico in a hug, screw the fact that he's not a fan of physical contact. People need hugs and Nico needs them more than anyone. Rick should write another little story where Nico finally finds someone.
3/14/2015 c1 PhantomNet329
that's effen sad but cute at the same time, maby it wasnt as sad as it made it look to me but i was listening to sad songs soo...
that's effen sad but cute at the same time, maby it wasnt as sad as it made it look to me but i was listening to sad songs soo...
12/2/2014 c1 Guest
more. please. i will die whithout it
more. please. i will die whithout it
9/25/2014 c1 Danique
Hello,
While searching for Nico di Angelo x Percy Jackson fanficts after reading the House Of Hades (I ship Percy and Nico so hard, they're just too cute for words) I stumbled into and later in several good fanfics and oneshots but I've got to say yours is by far the best one I've read. No joke. Im serious. I enjoyed this fanfic so much it attacked me with inspiration for my own (don't worry, I respect copy right). You've managed to capture Nico so perfectly, so touching.
I especially loved your last line and wished you could continue the one shot or anything, but I know that's rather difficult for one shots and even more for this particular scene, because I'm also having difficulty with whatever will happen to Percy after Nico confesses, through a kiss, or whatever. Most fanfics indicate Percy's sudden falling in love with Nico for no reason, but I've always imagined it as a one-side crush (poor Nico. He just gets all shit in the world on his shoulders).
Your words are perfectly chosen and balanced, every single adverb/adjective/noun/verb. I love how you've managed to capture Nico's chaos within, Nico's feelings of inferiority, his grudge towards Annabeth... (I can't tell you with words how much I enjoyed the "he tried hard enough to imagine that those arms really wanted to be there" part, and how he compares himself to Annabeth. It reminded me of Calypso's grudge shown in House Of Hades.)
Also the "everyone needs Percy, one way or the other" part really touched me :')
Eitherway your proudness is perfectly proper. This is something to be proud of, something to frame and admire.
Good luck with writing in the future,
-Danique
Hello,
While searching for Nico di Angelo x Percy Jackson fanficts after reading the House Of Hades (I ship Percy and Nico so hard, they're just too cute for words) I stumbled into and later in several good fanfics and oneshots but I've got to say yours is by far the best one I've read. No joke. Im serious. I enjoyed this fanfic so much it attacked me with inspiration for my own (don't worry, I respect copy right). You've managed to capture Nico so perfectly, so touching.
I especially loved your last line and wished you could continue the one shot or anything, but I know that's rather difficult for one shots and even more for this particular scene, because I'm also having difficulty with whatever will happen to Percy after Nico confesses, through a kiss, or whatever. Most fanfics indicate Percy's sudden falling in love with Nico for no reason, but I've always imagined it as a one-side crush (poor Nico. He just gets all shit in the world on his shoulders).
Your words are perfectly chosen and balanced, every single adverb/adjective/noun/verb. I love how you've managed to capture Nico's chaos within, Nico's feelings of inferiority, his grudge towards Annabeth... (I can't tell you with words how much I enjoyed the "he tried hard enough to imagine that those arms really wanted to be there" part, and how he compares himself to Annabeth. It reminded me of Calypso's grudge shown in House Of Hades.)
Also the "everyone needs Percy, one way or the other" part really touched me :')
Eitherway your proudness is perfectly proper. This is something to be proud of, something to frame and admire.
Good luck with writing in the future,
-Danique
1/18/2014 c1 Guest
Brilliant! But you cant just leave it there! How does Percy react? What happens mext? I want to know! You really should continue thisstory.
Brilliant! But you cant just leave it there! How does Percy react? What happens mext? I want to know! You really should continue thisstory.
12/21/2013 c1 Rosefanfiction2000
dude right another page! Its' a good story! come on you can't just leave a cliff hanger like that! What's Percy's reaction? Does Annabeth see? Did anyone see it? What does Nico do afterword? Please write another page!
dude right another page! Its' a good story! come on you can't just leave a cliff hanger like that! What's Percy's reaction? Does Annabeth see? Did anyone see it? What does Nico do afterword? Please write another page!