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12/30/2020 c2 Seraphy64
Yeeeeeeah no. A Spartan would have shot Colbert's head off when being threatened and told he was gonna be enslaved.
10/9/2020 c1 Guest
Enzio wtf kind of name
2/26/2020 c2 AMurder0fCrows
why is it so difficult to find a story where they outright say no to being bound. ugh, this had so many chapters too. oh well, back to searching...
2/26/2020 c2 AMurder0fCrows
just another tool to be used...
1/27/2020 c20 Atryx10
Meh story so far, 4/10.
1/26/2020 c11 Atryx10
What is he, bipolar?!
1/26/2020 c9 Atryx10
this super soldier is super sus.
1/26/2020 c7 Atryx10
I'm pretty sure he forgot to mention his 'hyper lethal' designation, and that he's the second person to ever recieve it.
1/26/2020 c5 Atryx10
Forgot to mention, it's pretty easy for a normal current day human to sprint at 10m/s or 36km/h. Usain Bolt can sprint at almost 45km/h.
1/26/2020 c6 Atryx10
This chapter was mediocre.
Not sure why he'd call her his master.
In previous chapter he said humanity was outnumbered 21 to 1, but in this he said 7 to 1. Which is it?
1/26/2020 c3 Atryx10
it's separated, yay! :D
1/26/2020 c2 Atryx10
your rnd notes still aren't separated from the story text :c
1/26/2020 c1 Atryx10
It's pretty good. Didn't really necessarily feel like Noble Six has 'Hyper Lethal' designation though.
Also pleasee use something to designate author's notes, like using bold text in author's notes or something like

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this.
11/6/2019 c2 Guest
Your a stupid bitch you already know that right? Just let me remind your dumbass.
10/3/2019 c19 hapyjohn
cool story bro cant wait for the Storm Covenant and UNSC to start fucking shit up
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