
1/16/2014 c9
3thaOne
Great story! I suggest giving aces powers to luffy like how Blackbeard got whitebeards. Keep up the good work

Great story! I suggest giving aces powers to luffy like how Blackbeard got whitebeards. Keep up the good work
1/16/2014 c9 funstory
Oh my god. Luffy is such a retard! Lol! I think this story is really fun to read, and Im looking forward to the reactions of fairy tail to Luffy's strength! Thanks for writing!
Oh my god. Luffy is such a retard! Lol! I think this story is really fun to read, and Im looking forward to the reactions of fairy tail to Luffy's strength! Thanks for writing!
1/16/2014 c9
2SpaceCannon
If he had a board he would've given her a ten! Lol that made me laugh. It was worth the wait

If he had a board he would've given her a ten! Lol that made me laugh. It was worth the wait
1/8/2014 c8 SporktheDork
Thank you so much for this amazing story. I haven't seen anything better than this so please update.
Thank you so much for this amazing story. I haven't seen anything better than this so please update.
12/30/2013 c8 Sam4801
Funny! great! amazing! Short...
Any way,
Luffy: It made no sense. Hot things were supposed to be hot colors, like red, orange, and yellow and stuff; the cannon thing that he had blocked, the -dare he say it- majic thing was most defiantly NOT a hot color, not by a long shot.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Funny! great! amazing! Short...
Any way,
Luffy: It made no sense. Hot things were supposed to be hot colors, like red, orange, and yellow and stuff; the cannon thing that he had blocked, the -dare he say it- majic thing was most defiantly NOT a hot color, not by a long shot.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
12/26/2013 c8 milleniumclone45
This was a fun chapter. I have always enjoyed seeing the characters reactions to Luffy suddenly grabbing them and acting like a slingshot and you certainly did it justice. I also would like to compliment you on your ability to keep Luffy consistently in character even while there is no dialogue or while he is thinking to himself. So I just wanted to say good job and that I can't wait to see where you take it from here.
This was a fun chapter. I have always enjoyed seeing the characters reactions to Luffy suddenly grabbing them and acting like a slingshot and you certainly did it justice. I also would like to compliment you on your ability to keep Luffy consistently in character even while there is no dialogue or while he is thinking to himself. So I just wanted to say good job and that I can't wait to see where you take it from here.
12/24/2013 c8 sup
Amazing story keep righting
Amazing story keep righting