for Transitioned12/20/2013 c7 Guest
Plz update
Plz update
12/17/2013 c7 Guest
Can u plz update love the story
Can u plz update love the story
12/15/2013 c7 Sam4801
Amazing story, I can't wait for you to update.
Luffy:HHHHHHHHHHOT!-HOT-HOT-HOT!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
Amazing story, I can't wait for you to update.
Luffy:HHHHHHHHHHOT!-HOT-HOT-HOT!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
12/14/2013 c7 
16ashlight41
nice one maybe going to erza luffy... hm... intrensting ...please continue soon.
16ashlight41nice one maybe going to erza luffy... hm... intrensting ...please continue soon.
12/8/2013 c7 Guest
Hi i know it hasnt been that long but can u plz update
Hi i know it hasnt been that long but can u plz update
12/8/2013 c7 allen
I like your history
I like your history
12/4/2013 c7 4El Emperador
This story is really interesting but if Luffy ate the Mera Mera no Mi then shouldnt he have the power as well...?
4El EmperadorThis story is really interesting but if Luffy ate the Mera Mera no Mi then shouldnt he have the power as well...?
12/1/2013 c7 jonjames427
i would say to not make this a luffy/lucy fic. i have seen too many fics focused on her.
in fact about half of all english fics of all ratings focus on lucy. that is about 9,000 and almost 10,000. i have seen the number and as far as i know am not lying.
i would say to not make this a luffy/lucy fic. i have seen too many fics focused on her.
in fact about half of all english fics of all ratings focus on lucy. that is about 9,000 and almost 10,000. i have seen the number and as far as i know am not lying.
11/30/2013 c3 24Nispedana
Interesting chapter! And poor luffy. I wonder if he'll eat the fruit, and I wonder how he won't die. Would be soooo cool if he gets the power. *hearts*
Anyway, I have to go now and I'll read the rest soon I swear! XDD
24NispedanaInteresting chapter! And poor luffy. I wonder if he'll eat the fruit, and I wonder how he won't die. Would be soooo cool if he gets the power. *hearts*
Anyway, I have to go now and I'll read the rest soon I swear! XDD
11/30/2013 c2 Nispedana
OMGOMG. Is it bad for me to ship LucyxLuffy?! It's funny cuz Luffy took her name in the arena. hahahahah. And the meeting was funny too! hahahaha
Off to the next chapter
OMGOMG. Is it bad for me to ship LucyxLuffy?! It's funny cuz Luffy took her name in the arena. hahahahah. And the meeting was funny too! hahahaha
Off to the next chapter
11/26/2013 c7 Mzr90
Another cool chapter. I did like Luffy's POV and his misspelling of the others names and how he made his stand. Also nice end there. Is there a chance Mira and Erza could go after Luffy?
Another cool chapter. I did like Luffy's POV and his misspelling of the others names and how he made his stand. Also nice end there. Is there a chance Mira and Erza could go after Luffy?