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2So Much Wasted Potential
I love this story so far, and I cant wait for more. Keep up the good work!
2So Much Wasted PotentialI love this story so far, and I cant wait for more. Keep up the good work!
11/26/2013 c7 CypherZer0
Awesome chapter although i wished to see Luffy kick more sses oh well anyways thx for this chaper and I hope you update soon because this is awesome! Thx again and Peace Out!
Awesome chapter although i wished to see Luffy kick more sses oh well anyways thx for this chaper and I hope you update soon because this is awesome! Thx again and Peace Out!
11/25/2013 c7 becket
i like it the first taste of badass luffy they will need a demonstration of the conquers though before they really take him serious
i like it the first taste of badass luffy they will need a demonstration of the conquers though before they really take him serious
11/25/2013 c7 BlunderBore
I like where this is going... LEM has such a nice sound to it, don't you think? Not that Luffy has the first clue about that sort of thing.
Seriously though, you manage to capture the reactions of various characters perfectly, especially Luffy's.
I like where this is going... LEM has such a nice sound to it, don't you think? Not that Luffy has the first clue about that sort of thing.
Seriously though, you manage to capture the reactions of various characters perfectly, especially Luffy's.
11/25/2013 c7 7MehLikey
Amazing stuff. :-) Keep it up! I'd beta 4 u, but I can't apply for it yet. :-( Post soon. :-)
7MehLikeyAmazing stuff. :-) Keep it up! I'd beta 4 u, but I can't apply for it yet. :-( Post soon. :-)
11/25/2013 c7 6Lightningblade49
IF luffy does have any Thinking Power which he does normally when it comes to fighting he'd destroy the cannon from outside so it cant fire anymore.
6Lightningblade49IF luffy does have any Thinking Power which he does normally when it comes to fighting he'd destroy the cannon from outside so it cant fire anymore.
11/22/2013 c6 3OnePieceChaldea
Oh ho ho... Luffy and Mira, huh? :)
I have to say that is an interesting pairing there.
Other than some problems with grammar and missing words this is a pretty good chapter. I can't wait for Luffy kick major amounts of Phantom Lord Ass. Have him beat the everloving shit out of Gajeel and Jose with ease! We all know he can do that.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
See Ya! ;)
3OnePieceChaldeaOh ho ho... Luffy and Mira, huh? :)
I have to say that is an interesting pairing there.
Other than some problems with grammar and missing words this is a pretty good chapter. I can't wait for Luffy kick major amounts of Phantom Lord Ass. Have him beat the everloving shit out of Gajeel and Jose with ease! We all know he can do that.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
See Ya! ;)
11/21/2013 c6 Guest
Hi. Can you plz update. Loving the story
Hi. Can you plz update. Loving the story
11/20/2013 c1 24Nispedana
Oh my! What an interesting concept!
Good prologue as well.
I'll read the rest soon, promise! *Gotta go to school lol*
24NispedanaOh my! What an interesting concept!
Good prologue as well.
I'll read the rest soon, promise! *Gotta go to school lol*
11/20/2013 c6 Shaun S. Ireland
You must continue.
Continue.
DO it.
You know you want too.
Good story if I must say.
Now to wait for next chapter!
You must continue.
Continue.
DO it.
You know you want too.
Good story if I must say.
Now to wait for next chapter!
11/18/2013 c6 CypherZer0
Hmmm... Nice chapter there hope you update soon really want to see Luffy beat them :D (yeah im a OPTard and im proud of it) wanna see Luffy use Haoshoku haki to beat them would be nice as well or you can just make him solo everyone xD. Well it's your story so your the one who needs to decide so Hope you the best and Good luck. Oh and by the way pls update soon. Peace!
Hmmm... Nice chapter there hope you update soon really want to see Luffy beat them :D (yeah im a OPTard and im proud of it) wanna see Luffy use Haoshoku haki to beat them would be nice as well or you can just make him solo everyone xD. Well it's your story so your the one who needs to decide so Hope you the best and Good luck. Oh and by the way pls update soon. Peace!