for Transitioned11/17/2013 c6 Mzr90
Really cool so far and hope you update soon. As for the possible Luffy/Mirajane, I'm 100% behind it, if you go for it.
Really cool so far and hope you update soon. As for the possible Luffy/Mirajane, I'm 100% behind it, if you go for it.
11/17/2013 c6 
2SpaceCannon
Finally, the moment when luffy gets ready to kick some ass! Update soon please
2SpaceCannonFinally, the moment when luffy gets ready to kick some ass! Update soon please
11/17/2013 c6 Guest
I have just started reading this and Im already begging for another update. This is already one of my fav fairy tail and one piece crossovers and you keep all the characters intact. Keep up the great work
I have just started reading this and Im already begging for another update. This is already one of my fav fairy tail and one piece crossovers and you keep all the characters intact. Keep up the great work
11/17/2013 c6 Sparkyflame101
This is really good I am looking forward to the next update
This is really good I am looking forward to the next update
11/12/2013 c1 Guest
I thought Luffy explained the his to the group.
Also Makarov while powerful, he can't hold a candle to the admirals, admirals are top tiers in OP, it's not something you should throw around or give to anyone.
I thought Luffy explained the his to the group.
Also Makarov while powerful, he can't hold a candle to the admirals, admirals are top tiers in OP, it's not something you should throw around or give to anyone.
11/11/2013 c5 7MehLikey
And yet another great chapter! Love Levys evil laugh. :-) Can't wait to see where it goes. :-)
7MehLikeyAnd yet another great chapter! Love Levys evil laugh. :-) Can't wait to see where it goes. :-)
11/11/2013 c5 3OnePieceChaldea
Well that was interesting.
Have to say I'm glad you updated and glad to see Luffy has learned he isn't in his world anymore. Although when he realizes that means he can't reach his crew, he's going to throw a fit.
Levy's behavior at the end was pretty funny considering how crazy she was at the end. Run Luffy, RUN!
There are some things that puzzle me though such as Luffy believing Makarov was as strong as an Admiral. Don't get me wrong, Makarov is a strong and powerful old man but I really don't think he is powerful enough to be considered an Admiral class fighter. Admirals, along with Fleet Admiral, are the strongest Marines the World government has and each one is incredibly powerful in their own right and with devastating abilities to match ranging from freezing entire oceans and Tsunamis solid in seconds (Aokiji), shooting powerful lasers and moving at the speed of light (Kizaru), permanently transforming islands into volcanic wastelands and unleashing Magma rain (Akainu), to even bringing Meteors down from Space (Fujitora)! Even Garp, who was only a vice admiral in ranks before he retired and constantly refused promotions to Admiral, was capable of pulverizing mountains into dust with his fists and pure strength and managed to beat Don Chinjao, who was capable of splitting the ice continent'a thick ice with just a headbutt. Makarov is strong but he isn't close to the level those guys are at. Rayleigh and Whitebeard were though.
Another thing that puzzled me was the fact that Erza still referred to Luffy's power as magic and believed that there was more than one Gomu Gomu no Mi. I thought Luffy explained it pretty well last chapter, or was she too busy being a grump to pay attention. :/
Despite some missing words, this was a pretty good chapter and I can't wait for the next one to come soon.
See Ya! :)
3OnePieceChaldeaWell that was interesting.
Have to say I'm glad you updated and glad to see Luffy has learned he isn't in his world anymore. Although when he realizes that means he can't reach his crew, he's going to throw a fit.
Levy's behavior at the end was pretty funny considering how crazy she was at the end. Run Luffy, RUN!
There are some things that puzzle me though such as Luffy believing Makarov was as strong as an Admiral. Don't get me wrong, Makarov is a strong and powerful old man but I really don't think he is powerful enough to be considered an Admiral class fighter. Admirals, along with Fleet Admiral, are the strongest Marines the World government has and each one is incredibly powerful in their own right and with devastating abilities to match ranging from freezing entire oceans and Tsunamis solid in seconds (Aokiji), shooting powerful lasers and moving at the speed of light (Kizaru), permanently transforming islands into volcanic wastelands and unleashing Magma rain (Akainu), to even bringing Meteors down from Space (Fujitora)! Even Garp, who was only a vice admiral in ranks before he retired and constantly refused promotions to Admiral, was capable of pulverizing mountains into dust with his fists and pure strength and managed to beat Don Chinjao, who was capable of splitting the ice continent'a thick ice with just a headbutt. Makarov is strong but he isn't close to the level those guys are at. Rayleigh and Whitebeard were though.
Another thing that puzzled me was the fact that Erza still referred to Luffy's power as magic and believed that there was more than one Gomu Gomu no Mi. I thought Luffy explained it pretty well last chapter, or was she too busy being a grump to pay attention. :/
Despite some missing words, this was a pretty good chapter and I can't wait for the next one to come soon.
See Ya! :)
11/7/2013 c4 DejDem
Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, I am so far loving the pacing of the story too, but I am most looking forward to Luffy learning he can't reach his crew and how he's going to freak out or what happens when he tells them he's a pirate. Not to mention the fact that considering this is post-timeskip Luffy he's basically gonna kick the asses of every opponent he can have in Fairy Tail except for Acnologia and Zeref. One problem is that I don't think Erza has traveled beyond Fiore, considering the fact that every country has it's own set of guilds and mages and I'm pretty sure other countries don't like foreign mages snooping around. In the most recent chapter one of the top 10 Wizard Saint's remarked that the title on really had weight in Fiore as there are many mages out of the country able to match or beat him. Though what happened to the Mera Mera no Mi? Is it at the bottom of the river? Did some random passerby grab it? Is Luffy's arrival part of some evil plot to get said fruit? I can't wait! Oh, but will Luffy's crew be joining him in this New World (lol) because I think he'd get pretty depressed if he went without his beloved crew for a long time.
Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, I am so far loving the pacing of the story too, but I am most looking forward to Luffy learning he can't reach his crew and how he's going to freak out or what happens when he tells them he's a pirate. Not to mention the fact that considering this is post-timeskip Luffy he's basically gonna kick the asses of every opponent he can have in Fairy Tail except for Acnologia and Zeref. One problem is that I don't think Erza has traveled beyond Fiore, considering the fact that every country has it's own set of guilds and mages and I'm pretty sure other countries don't like foreign mages snooping around. In the most recent chapter one of the top 10 Wizard Saint's remarked that the title on really had weight in Fiore as there are many mages out of the country able to match or beat him. Though what happened to the Mera Mera no Mi? Is it at the bottom of the river? Did some random passerby grab it? Is Luffy's arrival part of some evil plot to get said fruit? I can't wait! Oh, but will Luffy's crew be joining him in this New World (lol) because I think he'd get pretty depressed if he went without his beloved crew for a long time.
11/7/2013 c1 DejDem
First off I'd like to say that I really like the idea behind this story. But I have a hard time believing some of the events here especially with some of the most recent chapters. One is the fact that Luffy who has become a master at using his Haki was caught unawares by Doflamingo's killing intent. Then the fact that Luffy was completely outclassed, even if caught by surprise, seeing as Sanji was at least able to hold his own against the Warlord for a short time. Then there's the fact that he was going to eat Ace's devil fruit? I know that Luffy is a really simple guy who usually doesn't pay attention to things that don't matter to him but I think even Luffy knows not to eat a second DF. Not to mention I doubt he'd want Aces power for himself.
First off I'd like to say that I really like the idea behind this story. But I have a hard time believing some of the events here especially with some of the most recent chapters. One is the fact that Luffy who has become a master at using his Haki was caught unawares by Doflamingo's killing intent. Then the fact that Luffy was completely outclassed, even if caught by surprise, seeing as Sanji was at least able to hold his own against the Warlord for a short time. Then there's the fact that he was going to eat Ace's devil fruit? I know that Luffy is a really simple guy who usually doesn't pay attention to things that don't matter to him but I think even Luffy knows not to eat a second DF. Not to mention I doubt he'd want Aces power for himself.
11/5/2013 c4 3OnePieceChaldea
This is getting more interesting by the second!
I really want to see where this story will go so I'll keep a lookout on it!
See Ya! :D
3OnePieceChaldeaThis is getting more interesting by the second!
I really want to see where this story will go so I'll keep a lookout on it!
See Ya! :D