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6Telemathene
Superb oneshots, my dude! I never really considered the journey that Wan and Raava walked before Harmonic Convergence took place. You put it into perspective for me on how complex and hard and loving and grand it must have been. Wan did not ask for this big mission to fulfill, and Raava did not ask to depend on a human to fulfill her mission. Both of them are going through big struggles, and I liked that you touched on that in these oneshots. I loved the details you put into them and I loved all the sensory additions. I felt as if it were really happening to me. I actually cried a little bit at the end of chapter 4. I'm glad that Wan and Raava have that kind of connection worth exploring. You've inspired me to write a little something on that, actually! Thank you for the inspiration and thank you for writing this! You put a lot of hard work and dedication into this and I love to see it! I just finished my shift at work and I work again tomorrow so this was the perfect little story I needed to relax before I go off to work again. Thanks again! Much love! :)
6TelematheneSuperb oneshots, my dude! I never really considered the journey that Wan and Raava walked before Harmonic Convergence took place. You put it into perspective for me on how complex and hard and loving and grand it must have been. Wan did not ask for this big mission to fulfill, and Raava did not ask to depend on a human to fulfill her mission. Both of them are going through big struggles, and I liked that you touched on that in these oneshots. I loved the details you put into them and I loved all the sensory additions. I felt as if it were really happening to me. I actually cried a little bit at the end of chapter 4. I'm glad that Wan and Raava have that kind of connection worth exploring. You've inspired me to write a little something on that, actually! Thank you for the inspiration and thank you for writing this! You put a lot of hard work and dedication into this and I love to see it! I just finished my shift at work and I work again tomorrow so this was the perfect little story I needed to relax before I go off to work again. Thanks again! Much love! :)
1/11/2021 c1 Koni
i know you might not be continuing this but this is the best Wan and Raava fic I've read so far- them making mistakes and (hopefully) learning from it is giving us the human side of the story that was missing. I love it so much and thanks for this!
i know you might not be continuing this but this is the best Wan and Raava fic I've read so far- them making mistakes and (hopefully) learning from it is giving us the human side of the story that was missing. I love it so much and thanks for this!
9/25/2020 c4 IAmATraiter
So I absolutely hate LoK i think it retcons the whole ATLA universe but this became my guilty pleasure i don't tell anyone about. ur a good writwr pls make you if you ever get back into this. Like I wasn't expecting to be actually invested but this is really amazing I hate to admit.
So I absolutely hate LoK i think it retcons the whole ATLA universe but this became my guilty pleasure i don't tell anyone about. ur a good writwr pls make you if you ever get back into this. Like I wasn't expecting to be actually invested but this is really amazing I hate to admit.
8/28/2017 c4 Guest
This is amazing!
This is amazing!
7/1/2015 c4 1loveormadness
These are really great, a very creative and believable insight on what might have happened on Wan and Raava's travels. Even with the first one I think you got both characters down pretty good! I know how you feel on the shipping, I feel very conflicted about Waava myself, as lovely and creative the human Raavas get with fanart (at least I think so anyway), I just can't bring myself to agree with the idea of them falling for eachother like that or her taking that form just so a romance can bloom...so it's very refreshing to see a fanfiction where none of that happens. I also love that chapter where Wan meets Ren, that was very creative to put in an oc that may be a potential love interest for him. :) It was adorable and really heartbreaking at the end. I myself am writing a longterm story about Wan's adventures post-Convergence, but it is a comic and there is a chapter that does touch on his journey with Raava when training. I too kind of worry that because my story is the same way in that he's not paired with Raava, it will turn off and scare away the shipping crowd. :/ I would like your permission first before doing anything, but if it were okay with you, I got really inspired by the first couple oneshots here with Wan and Raava's interactions, I would like to add them as part of my story and illustrate it out, but only with your approval of course. I would indeed credit you, as I am collaborating with others in that they let me use their ocs for this time setting and ideas.
1loveormadnessThese are really great, a very creative and believable insight on what might have happened on Wan and Raava's travels. Even with the first one I think you got both characters down pretty good! I know how you feel on the shipping, I feel very conflicted about Waava myself, as lovely and creative the human Raavas get with fanart (at least I think so anyway), I just can't bring myself to agree with the idea of them falling for eachother like that or her taking that form just so a romance can bloom...so it's very refreshing to see a fanfiction where none of that happens. I also love that chapter where Wan meets Ren, that was very creative to put in an oc that may be a potential love interest for him. :) It was adorable and really heartbreaking at the end. I myself am writing a longterm story about Wan's adventures post-Convergence, but it is a comic and there is a chapter that does touch on his journey with Raava when training. I too kind of worry that because my story is the same way in that he's not paired with Raava, it will turn off and scare away the shipping crowd. :/ I would like your permission first before doing anything, but if it were okay with you, I got really inspired by the first couple oneshots here with Wan and Raava's interactions, I would like to add them as part of my story and illustrate it out, but only with your approval of course. I would indeed credit you, as I am collaborating with others in that they let me use their ocs for this time setting and ideas.
10/30/2014 c3 loveormadness
I seriously adore this story! It is so refreshing to see a fanfic where Wan isn't romantically shipped with Raava nor does she have a human form here. I like the idea of human Raava (only for the sake of seeing's people's interpretations and how creative they can get), but it's nice to read about her canon spirit kite form. It's also very nice to read a story where Wan actually likes a human girl (that isn't human Raava for once), that I would like to see more of to be honest.
Moving along, great writing, nice development between the characters, and it's also nice to see Mula having some moments, I liked it when she was being protective of Wan and seeing her interaction with Raava.
I just adored these episodes and I love the relationship between Wan and Raava, I personally viewed it as something platonic but also very emotional and genuine. To me, it's rare to see in fan fiction without it being involved with a romance between them, which I doubt the writers were going for. I think if Raava were meant to be his love interest (like many seem to think), I think they would have specifically stated it in some way. I guess it's another thing that's left open to interpretation, but I prefer their relationship as something platonic, as it seems much more effective to the plot.
I seriously adore this story! It is so refreshing to see a fanfic where Wan isn't romantically shipped with Raava nor does she have a human form here. I like the idea of human Raava (only for the sake of seeing's people's interpretations and how creative they can get), but it's nice to read about her canon spirit kite form. It's also very nice to read a story where Wan actually likes a human girl (that isn't human Raava for once), that I would like to see more of to be honest.
Moving along, great writing, nice development between the characters, and it's also nice to see Mula having some moments, I liked it when she was being protective of Wan and seeing her interaction with Raava.
I just adored these episodes and I love the relationship between Wan and Raava, I personally viewed it as something platonic but also very emotional and genuine. To me, it's rare to see in fan fiction without it being involved with a romance between them, which I doubt the writers were going for. I think if Raava were meant to be his love interest (like many seem to think), I think they would have specifically stated it in some way. I guess it's another thing that's left open to interpretation, but I prefer their relationship as something platonic, as it seems much more effective to the plot.
9/22/2014 c1 Atea1793
I hope you can update soon! I LOVE Wan's story and I wish the creators had been able to add more to it!
I hope you can update soon! I LOVE Wan's story and I wish the creators had been able to add more to it!
9/15/2014 c4 VOICHERA
Oh man this is amazing. I just love how you described the relationship between Wan and Raava. I really like your writing style and especially this last oneshot. I also liked how you added in that hint of romance in your third oneshot (if I'm not mistaken) that was a really nice addition. I hope you continue this! It's a very interesting idea and I would certainly look forward to seeing what would come next! I would love to read more. Awesome job!
Oh man this is amazing. I just love how you described the relationship between Wan and Raava. I really like your writing style and especially this last oneshot. I also liked how you added in that hint of romance in your third oneshot (if I'm not mistaken) that was a really nice addition. I hope you continue this! It's a very interesting idea and I would certainly look forward to seeing what would come next! I would love to read more. Awesome job!
8/31/2014 c4 KieraTayls
I know you haven't really updated this in a while, but I have to say, I LOVE your writing!
I hadn't actually gotten the chance to watch Legend of Korra books 2 and 3 until this weekend, since Nickelodeon just posted all of the episodes up on their website. So, even though I've been reading Invisible for quite a while, I hadn't gotten around to reading this other story of yours until now.
Sorry, I'm really terrible at leaving reviews, and I never really know what to say... Just that I love the story, I guess! Whether you choose to continue this story and Invisible, or whether you're done with fanfiction and stuff, I just figured it was worth mentioning that I really do love your writing. You're really good at it, that's for sure :)
I know you haven't really updated this in a while, but I have to say, I LOVE your writing!
I hadn't actually gotten the chance to watch Legend of Korra books 2 and 3 until this weekend, since Nickelodeon just posted all of the episodes up on their website. So, even though I've been reading Invisible for quite a while, I hadn't gotten around to reading this other story of yours until now.
Sorry, I'm really terrible at leaving reviews, and I never really know what to say... Just that I love the story, I guess! Whether you choose to continue this story and Invisible, or whether you're done with fanfiction and stuff, I just figured it was worth mentioning that I really do love your writing. You're really good at it, that's for sure :)
1/22/2014 c4 Guest
Please update! This fanfiction is so amazing!
Please update! This fanfiction is so amazing!
1/21/2014 c4 DreamHuntress
I love this so much! Please update! :)
I love this so much! Please update! :)