
10/30/2013 c1
9GONEiam
Really awesome story! It's a good follow up on the end of the episode! Please update soon ! :)

Really awesome story! It's a good follow up on the end of the episode! Please update soon ! :)
10/29/2013 c1
4Shari Skye
The second to last paragraph is my favorite line. '...she assured him though Penelope's heart was quietly breaking as she encouraged her secret crush to find happiness in the arms of some unknown woman.'
Very well done, and I can't thank you enough for that. Since I haven't had a chance to jot down any of my own ideas after last week. THANK YOU THANK YOU, I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

The second to last paragraph is my favorite line. '...she assured him though Penelope's heart was quietly breaking as she encouraged her secret crush to find happiness in the arms of some unknown woman.'
Very well done, and I can't thank you enough for that. Since I haven't had a chance to jot down any of my own ideas after last week. THANK YOU THANK YOU, I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
10/29/2013 c1
9breathegsr
I have to say that I hated that episode. It's only saving grace was Penny saying "Wild Horses Sir". But this story was beautiful and was exactly what I needed to make it all better. I loved the interaction between Penelope and Jack. Great job!

I have to say that I hated that episode. It's only saving grace was Penny saying "Wild Horses Sir". But this story was beautiful and was exactly what I needed to make it all better. I loved the interaction between Penelope and Jack. Great job!
10/28/2013 c1 red2013
i love this story so much i have read three tmes. i loved hotch flirting with garcia at the end. garcia cared for hotch a long time. take your time both of the stories i am following at he minute. good luck with your new job.
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i love this story so much i have read three tmes. i loved hotch flirting with garcia at the end. garcia cared for hotch a long time. take your time both of the stories i am following at he minute. good luck with your new job.
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