for The Tragedy of Inaction2/11/2014 c2 I don't see
Why this hasn't had more reviews. I mean, it's not a fantastic epic the likes of which will change the world, but it's still a good story.
It is, by definition, a tragedy. So is the source material. I'd say you've done well.
Why this hasn't had more reviews. I mean, it's not a fantastic epic the likes of which will change the world, but it's still a good story.
It is, by definition, a tragedy. So is the source material. I'd say you've done well.
12/10/2013 c2 qwertyui
I am impressed by the length of the story, but I must be honest and say I didn't really like it.
It didn't seem like an angst fic, but more like a vengence spree fic with some waff moments in there. But i'd like to see more from you as your writing style and skills are solid, thanks for writing the story.
I am impressed by the length of the story, but I must be honest and say I didn't really like it.
It didn't seem like an angst fic, but more like a vengence spree fic with some waff moments in there. But i'd like to see more from you as your writing style and skills are solid, thanks for writing the story.
810/29/2013 c1 Wing00Raiser
cool story
i liked that shinji finally tried to go detective mode on NERV, hopefully things go a little bit better for him. cause honestly even if third impact didn't happen, he'd still be screwed over. best case scenario; he'd be placed under house arrest for the rest of his life for being able to pilot eva.
middle case scenario; he gets executed.
worse case scenario; he and the others are either forced to military service for the rest of their lives, or they commit suicide.
cool story
i liked that shinji finally tried to go detective mode on NERV, hopefully things go a little bit better for him. cause honestly even if third impact didn't happen, he'd still be screwed over. best case scenario; he'd be placed under house arrest for the rest of his life for being able to pilot eva.
middle case scenario; he gets executed.
worse case scenario; he and the others are either forced to military service for the rest of their lives, or they commit suicide.