for The Red Valley11/27/2013 c2 
12Princess Unikitty
Hm, B:TAS and Teen Titans? This should be pretty interesting. Besides the typical "Beast Boy, not BeastBoy" spelling error, I like what's up so far.
12Princess UnikittyHm, B:TAS and Teen Titans? This should be pretty interesting. Besides the typical "Beast Boy, not BeastBoy" spelling error, I like what's up so far.
10/31/2013 c1 peepufool252
LOL. im cracking up at beastboy and raven casually smoking. your character interactions and detail is good.
LOL. im cracking up at beastboy and raven casually smoking. your character interactions and detail is good.
10/31/2013 c1 Guest
Wow really? Your stories are unique an bazzerk. I am so tired of reading the vampire and highschool AU cliches here. I'm curious to see how the plot unfolds.
Wow really? Your stories are unique an bazzerk. I am so tired of reading the vampire and highschool AU cliches here. I'm curious to see how the plot unfolds.
10/30/2013 c1 Nostalgic Critic
Sorry about not logging out and using your username. Okay! I'm rewriting what I said last time: Great first chapter. Looks like you took some time off to improve your writing. I can't wait to read chapter 2. I really like your last story, "Djinn and Obsidian Egg." Not everyone got it, but I sure did. A parody of Alice and Wonderland. It wasn't suppose to make sense because it was a dream. Anyways, I'm interested in how you're going to place this story in the Arkham City Universe. I haven't had the chance to watch any of Kwings new Arkham Origins walkthroughs on Youtube. Have you?
Sorry about not logging out and using your username. Okay! I'm rewriting what I said last time: Great first chapter. Looks like you took some time off to improve your writing. I can't wait to read chapter 2. I really like your last story, "Djinn and Obsidian Egg." Not everyone got it, but I sure did. A parody of Alice and Wonderland. It wasn't suppose to make sense because it was a dream. Anyways, I'm interested in how you're going to place this story in the Arkham City Universe. I haven't had the chance to watch any of Kwings new Arkham Origins walkthroughs on Youtube. Have you?