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11/1/2013 c1 MoonBronze115
Love it! you are an excellent writer!
11/1/2013 c1 chel123
Wow. that was incredibly written and I loved the imagery. It was just perfect *dies of jealousy at the thought someone actually wrote that*
11/1/2013 c1 2Hufflepuffelephant
Wow I could really imagine that! That was beautiful :)
10/31/2013 c1 4Rose Davis
You had my attention. Good Work!
10/31/2013 c1 7MemoirsofaLostCause
well isn't that angsty? i swear the imagery is so vivid i can smell the cigarette smoke and the stale alcohol. hermione the flame girl? i swear everything seems so dark that i can see the sultriness and it's bloody suffocating. it's definitely different— no fluff in sight. i'm exceptionally tired of soft draco and slutty hermione, but this dark hermione is a wonderful change. good job venturing into the unknown and manipulating the taboo!
10/31/2013 c1 yurio-nice
Oh...I heart it...so beautiful...
-Crys
10/31/2013 c1 bicycletracks
Beautiful story!
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