for The Alchemist Apprentice8/19/2023 c3 Andrew234
only ten years after you admit your guilt with a significant lack of recourse I could see petunia getting 10 but Vernon deserves 25 to life and dudley straight to mental health
only ten years after you admit your guilt with a significant lack of recourse I could see petunia getting 10 but Vernon deserves 25 to life and dudley straight to mental health
10/7/2022 c6 Guest
Seguirás continuándome tus historias
Seguirás continuándome tus historias
9/1/2022 c1 guest999
still needlessly long, you could've easily turned this single chapter into 2 if not 3 chapters
still needlessly long, you could've easily turned this single chapter into 2 if not 3 chapters
1/28/2022 c6 crazyjim87
It's a good story
It has been some years since your last update and a new chapter or a teaser. Or a this story is abandoned might be best uploaded.
It has a lot of promise but there are some typos and small mistakes. Like your /you're .
Other than that keep up the good work. It's fantastic
It's a good story
It has been some years since your last update and a new chapter or a teaser. Or a this story is abandoned might be best uploaded.
It has a lot of promise but there are some typos and small mistakes. Like your /you're .
Other than that keep up the good work. It's fantastic
8/1/2021 c1 
5iacopo.passerini
Beh vediamo un pò che cosa ci riserva il futuro ... Harry potter che fa l'alchimista e diventerà molto forte e la farà pagare!
5iacopo.passeriniBeh vediamo un pò che cosa ci riserva il futuro ... Harry potter che fa l'alchimista e diventerà molto forte e la farà pagare!
10/25/2020 c6 lou2003us
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work boss!
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work boss!
8/16/2020 c6 TheThunderEmperor01000
This story really continues to be very good, even after all this time. Harry being the adopted grandson of Nicolas and Perenelle and learning alchemy still really is a very badass and epic idea/plot for a Harry Potter fanfic.
Then, will you still continue to write this story, even after all this time? If yes, please, update the next chapter soon.
ALSO, really please, if possible, could you at least send to me a PM/message telling if will you still continue to write this story or not?
Really PLEASE, if possible to you, could you at least send to me a PM/message about this?
This story really continues to be very good, even after all this time. Harry being the adopted grandson of Nicolas and Perenelle and learning alchemy still really is a very badass and epic idea/plot for a Harry Potter fanfic.
Then, will you still continue to write this story, even after all this time? If yes, please, update the next chapter soon.
ALSO, really please, if possible, could you at least send to me a PM/message telling if will you still continue to write this story or not?
Really PLEASE, if possible to you, could you at least send to me a PM/message about this?
5/26/2020 c5 2Masamune X23
Can you please give me a sign that your still alive... this plague has me worried for those I care about in long distance also.
Tell me your alive PLEASE!
2Masamune X23Can you please give me a sign that your still alive... this plague has me worried for those I care about in long distance also.
Tell me your alive PLEASE!
1/13/2020 c6 themaximus
Hey Aragon Potter, it is me, themaximus.
In all seriousness, I hope that you are doing well and that one day you will be able to update this story again.
To me, being sincere, this story and its plot were among the best stories of Harry Potter that I have read in this site(even with it only still having 6 chapters).
It is really a very interesting story.
Then, I really hope that one day you will be able to continue to write this story until its end.
This story is really worthy of being fully continued.
(IMPORTANT OBS!)-ALSO, I'm really sorry for be bothering you about this after all this time(principally here, in the reviews, again), but really please, if possible, could you unblock me and permit me to send to you some PMs/messages with some questions/suggestions about this story and about some other of your fanfics.
I'm really sorry for have bothered you so much in the past, principally by repeating some questions over and over again.
But, being completely sincere with you, I really promise that, this time, I really don't will do this anymore, I don't will do this again(if I ever do this again, you can block me again).
And, this time, I will try to send less questions/suggestions(a minor quantity of questions/suggestions) than I did in the past, trying to keep control over the number of questions/suggestions to not let the quantity become too much exaggerated.
Then, please, could you unblock me and permit me to send to you some new messages/PMs(with questions/suggestions) about this story and about some other of your fanfics?
Please, if possible, could you agree to do this?
If you agree, please, if possible, could you send to me a message/PM telling that you have unblocked me, as soon as possible?
Well, this is all that I wanted to say.
I hope that you will be able to read this review of mine one day(and that you will agree to unblock me and permit to me to continue to send to you some questions/suggestions about your stories, like I did in the past).
I also really hope that you will be able to continue this story and your other stories one day too.
This story is really too good to be abandoned.
Thank you for your time.
themaximus
Hey Aragon Potter, it is me, themaximus.
In all seriousness, I hope that you are doing well and that one day you will be able to update this story again.
To me, being sincere, this story and its plot were among the best stories of Harry Potter that I have read in this site(even with it only still having 6 chapters).
It is really a very interesting story.
Then, I really hope that one day you will be able to continue to write this story until its end.
This story is really worthy of being fully continued.
(IMPORTANT OBS!)-ALSO, I'm really sorry for be bothering you about this after all this time(principally here, in the reviews, again), but really please, if possible, could you unblock me and permit me to send to you some PMs/messages with some questions/suggestions about this story and about some other of your fanfics.
I'm really sorry for have bothered you so much in the past, principally by repeating some questions over and over again.
But, being completely sincere with you, I really promise that, this time, I really don't will do this anymore, I don't will do this again(if I ever do this again, you can block me again).
And, this time, I will try to send less questions/suggestions(a minor quantity of questions/suggestions) than I did in the past, trying to keep control over the number of questions/suggestions to not let the quantity become too much exaggerated.
Then, please, could you unblock me and permit me to send to you some new messages/PMs(with questions/suggestions) about this story and about some other of your fanfics?
Please, if possible, could you agree to do this?
If you agree, please, if possible, could you send to me a message/PM telling that you have unblocked me, as soon as possible?
Well, this is all that I wanted to say.
I hope that you will be able to read this review of mine one day(and that you will agree to unblock me and permit to me to continue to send to you some questions/suggestions about your stories, like I did in the past).
I also really hope that you will be able to continue this story and your other stories one day too.
This story is really too good to be abandoned.
Thank you for your time.
themaximus