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12/19/2015 c1 2Masamune X23
Hey are you there Aragon Potter?

It's been months since I last heard from you and I just want to know that your ok.
11/26/2015 c4 Lethekeres
I really like this story so far. A mistake I think you have made is that in an earlier chapter you said perenelle was older than nicolas but the end notes of chapter 4 you wrote that nicolas was older. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
11/14/2015 c4 Robert77833
Awesome story, hope the update rate picks up though :\
11/8/2015 c4 harryislife
Really good, I hope you update soon.
11/7/2015 c4 Guest
you have a gift for writing i mean this story is amazing and i hope you can update soon
8/27/2015 c4 KnowPein
Nice story

Though one problem with continuity. ..
Its harry's first birthday with Flammels
Harry's birthday comes in July
Schools open in September

So Fluer letter scene should be after birthday...

Hope you update soon
8/26/2015 c4 3doubledamn
If you ever do a 'Filler Chapter' where Harry and others wander around Muggle Paris, could they visit the Auberge Nicolas Flamel restaurant?
8/4/2015 c1 ExecutionerKain
Nice start!
7/24/2015 c4 1Ilireanwri
Excellent... simply excellent :-)
I can't immagine the faces of everyone one Harry appears in Hogwarts and it becom known he stays with the Flamels, or in the 4th year Fleur greats him with a Hug (Oohh the other Boys will be ssssooooooo jealous ;-) )
I will follow this story and looking forward to your next update
7/24/2015 c1 Ilireanwri
Great. An Masterpiece of Art. I love it after reading not even half of the first Chapter.
Good Job
please keep it up
6/19/2015 c2 Ellimist01
Well this chapter was fine but for some reason Remus annoyed the hell out of me. I mean it's like you're trying to suddenly make him the concerned adult, when he hasn't even tried to be there or even visit Harry once so far. He as a former friend of Harry's parents is just as responsible as Dumbledore for Harry running away. And I'd actually be surprised if the Dursley's get away with what they did seeing as Harry has some fanatical fans even if JKR never really showed them much except the first book.
6/19/2015 c1 Ellimist01
Well its good. Some editing needs to be done but you put the warning at the bottom which defeats the purpose. I do want to see what you have Harry learning for the next four years. And as for which house he goes to, I doubt it will be Gryffindor, and he's not really the manipulating type so not Slytherin, he might have Hufflepuff loyalty, and staying with the Flamel's might make him thirst for knowledge so that would make him most likely become a Ravenclaw
5/17/2015 c2 9Neo-Devil
this is gonna feel a bit like full metal alchemist isn't it...well not alot, but perhaps a little bit, right?
5/14/2015 c4 dark zues
Awesome story... love the plot .. keep it up. .
4/25/2015 c3 peinmaximus
PLEASE,REALLY REALLY PLEASE,ANSWER THE MESSAGE THAT I SENT TO YOU.
I REALLY REALLY PROMISE THAT THIS TIME I WILL STOP TO SEND TO YOU REPEATED QUESTIONS.
THEN,REALLY REALLY PLEASE,I REALLY BEG TO YOU,ANSWER THE MESSAGE.
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