for His Lost Innocence11/26/2020 c7 
3Heksy
Hi Noeline (what a beautiful name, by the way)
I loved the way your story developed.
The way Harry's vengeful nature comes out, because of the betrayal of his so called friends.
And how Severus' mellowed way tempers the hatred of Harry.
Great job and thank you for sharing.
~Alexandra~
3HeksyHi Noeline (what a beautiful name, by the way)
I loved the way your story developed.
The way Harry's vengeful nature comes out, because of the betrayal of his so called friends.
And how Severus' mellowed way tempers the hatred of Harry.
Great job and thank you for sharing.
~Alexandra~
10/28/2020 c7 ShinoYukino
No nie. Nie zgadzam się na takie zakończenie! Jest wiele spraw nierozwiązanych. Czy Harry ujawni innym swoją potęgę? Czy się z resztą pogodzi? Jak będzie wyglądać przyszłość Sev'a i Harry'ego? Czy Harry i Draco się pogodzą i będą przyjaciółmi? Ja naprawdę muszę to wiedzieć.
No nie. Nie zgadzam się na takie zakończenie! Jest wiele spraw nierozwiązanych. Czy Harry ujawni innym swoją potęgę? Czy się z resztą pogodzi? Jak będzie wyglądać przyszłość Sev'a i Harry'ego? Czy Harry i Draco się pogodzą i będą przyjaciółmi? Ja naprawdę muszę to wiedzieć.
10/8/2018 c5 Larry
BULLSHIT! He could work with potions in a Nother freaking country! OF COURSE he should have broken his lover out immediately! Actually, no – he never should have let him be locked up to begin with! What kind of freaking MORON would just LEAVE him there!?
BULLSHIT! He could work with potions in a Nother freaking country! OF COURSE he should have broken his lover out immediately! Actually, no – he never should have let him be locked up to begin with! What kind of freaking MORON would just LEAVE him there!?
10/8/2018 c4 Lara
Yeah, no! I just can’t make myself read past this point! How could Harry be so stupid, weak and faithfulness as to betray Severus like that!? How could he just LEAVE him in that horrific place?! He never should have let them take him away in the first place! He had the power to stop them! And what about a Veritaserum trial?! Hello?! IDIOT!
Yeah, no! I just can’t make myself read past this point! How could Harry be so stupid, weak and faithfulness as to betray Severus like that!? How could he just LEAVE him in that horrific place?! He never should have let them take him away in the first place! He had the power to stop them! And what about a Veritaserum trial?! Hello?! IDIOT!
10/8/2018 c2 Mi
Uh... If he’s so all powerful, than WHY the heck didn’t Harry just take Severus and leave when Sev was unjustly sentenced to a Hell-hole of a prison INFAMOUS for human rights abuses!? Harry should’ve grabbed his lover, fought their way out of there, and left the country instead! Duh!
Uh... If he’s so all powerful, than WHY the heck didn’t Harry just take Severus and leave when Sev was unjustly sentenced to a Hell-hole of a prison INFAMOUS for human rights abuses!? Harry should’ve grabbed his lover, fought their way out of there, and left the country instead! Duh!
6/20/2018 c15 25P.T. Tucker
This was great! It was really interesting to see a "wrongly imprisoned" fic that didn't have Harry breaking him out, especially since he COULD. And I love how much blame is being placed on him...for doing nothing. Like, they literally do expect him to come save them, like it's his job or something. Good grief. Glad Harry and Sev got their happy ending.
25P.T. TuckerThis was great! It was really interesting to see a "wrongly imprisoned" fic that didn't have Harry breaking him out, especially since he COULD. And I love how much blame is being placed on him...for doing nothing. Like, they literally do expect him to come save them, like it's his job or something. Good grief. Glad Harry and Sev got their happy ending.
3/19/2018 c15 Bee
Loved this glad harry and severus got together again
Loved this glad harry and severus got together again
2/5/2017 c15 4thephoenixandthedragon4ever
This was an incredible story, I completely loved it and hope you continue to write amazing Pro-Severus stories. This was a beautiful Snarry fanfiction.
4thephoenixandthedragon4everThis was an incredible story, I completely loved it and hope you continue to write amazing Pro-Severus stories. This was a beautiful Snarry fanfiction.