5/6/2023 c20 Guest
Damn, not even Azkaban would stop me from killing this abuser Severus has a father.
Damn, not even Azkaban would stop me from killing this abuser Severus has a father.
6/20/2021 c40 10tpaturi
Eileen speaks as if Severus doesn't have a valid reason to hate Tobias. Tobias is an abusive piece of shit. How could a mother allow her son to grow up in that sort of environment?
Eileen speaks as if Severus doesn't have a valid reason to hate Tobias. Tobias is an abusive piece of shit. How could a mother allow her son to grow up in that sort of environment?
10/23/2020 c27 Guest
Please eat poop
Please eat poop
7/29/2019 c20 Porcalein
seriusly! anyone, someone i dont care who! JUST DO SOMTHING!
god i'm so pissed i just wanna beat the shit out of Tobias
(nothing towards you as the author i really love the story itself XD i just hate it when people take crap and doesn't to something about it)
seriusly! anyone, someone i dont care who! JUST DO SOMTHING!
god i'm so pissed i just wanna beat the shit out of Tobias
(nothing towards you as the author i really love the story itself XD i just hate it when people take crap and doesn't to something about it)
7/15/2019 c33 13excessivelyperky
Oh, Eileen, what makes you think Tobias will change? Will he beat on this child, too?
Oh, Eileen, what makes you think Tobias will change? Will he beat on this child, too?
12/30/2017 c8 MasonMac
Oh dang bois! Its gonna be a love triangle! Lily's gonna love Ann and Sev's gonna be jealous!
But on a serious note, a lot of the wording is kinda stiff, it doesn't feel like Severus or Annettes saying those words etc.
Oh dang bois! Its gonna be a love triangle! Lily's gonna love Ann and Sev's gonna be jealous!
But on a serious note, a lot of the wording is kinda stiff, it doesn't feel like Severus or Annettes saying those words etc.
9/17/2017 c40 7Faded Galaxia
AAAHHHH this was so beautiful...I cried a couple of times...hell, I'm crying right now...heading over to read the sequel right now! 3
AAAHHHH this was so beautiful...I cried a couple of times...hell, I'm crying right now...heading over to read the sequel right now! 3
6/19/2017 c40 28Daughter of Thranduil
That was a lovely read. Snape spent so much of his life alone in the books, it's nice to think he has someone to love him and be happy with.
That was a lovely read. Snape spent so much of his life alone in the books, it's nice to think he has someone to love him and be happy with.
5/25/2017 c12 2Nilsia-Tengun
Ok this is actually a review for chapter 13, it wouldn't let me review it because I had read it before ages ago and left a short review, and you can't review the same chapter twice..
Loved this : the air tasted of sunbaked dead leaves on a forest floor.
and this: The Gryffindor Captain smiled at her with such a devilish smirk that it would make a fox proud.
and this: The bludger zoomed off after bat cracked against, giggling like a madman.
and this: like a rat being caught with a morsel of food
This chapter was chock-a-block with beautiful expressions. I was really impressed. It's also great to see the Hufflepuffs succeed every once in a while :D
Ok this is actually a review for chapter 13, it wouldn't let me review it because I had read it before ages ago and left a short review, and you can't review the same chapter twice..
Loved this : the air tasted of sunbaked dead leaves on a forest floor.
and this: The Gryffindor Captain smiled at her with such a devilish smirk that it would make a fox proud.
and this: The bludger zoomed off after bat cracked against, giggling like a madman.
and this: like a rat being caught with a morsel of food
This chapter was chock-a-block with beautiful expressions. I was really impressed. It's also great to see the Hufflepuffs succeed every once in a while :D
4/3/2017 c10 Nilsia-Tengun
I like the details you give about the Muggle Studies course because it's not something we learn anything about from canon.
I also liked the expression "to hang out with her fellow badgers", it sounds very natural.
I like the details you give about the Muggle Studies course because it's not something we learn anything about from canon.
I also liked the expression "to hang out with her fellow badgers", it sounds very natural.
4/3/2017 c7 Nilsia-Tengun
Great chapter, It's nice to see a description of Annette through Severus' eyes.
Great chapter, It's nice to see a description of Annette through Severus' eyes.
3/26/2017 c4 Nilsia-Tengun
It's great to read classroom scenes, really reminds me of JKR. I love whenever magical beasts are mentioned because I don't know all the canon ones.
Your food descriptions are lovely. They make me hungry.
I laughed when Annette finished her spoonful before going to help Snape. Girl has her priorities right.
It's great to read classroom scenes, really reminds me of JKR. I love whenever magical beasts are mentioned because I don't know all the canon ones.
Your food descriptions are lovely. They make me hungry.
I laughed when Annette finished her spoonful before going to help Snape. Girl has her priorities right.