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5/6/2023 c20 Guest
Damn, not even Azkaban would stop me from killing this abuser Severus has a father.
6/20/2021 c40 10tpaturi
Eileen speaks as if Severus doesn't have a valid reason to hate Tobias. Tobias is an abusive piece of shit. How could a mother allow her son to grow up in that sort of environment?
1/8/2021 c40 fireelfmaiden1
wonderful job.
10/23/2020 c27 Guest
Please eat poop
7/29/2019 c20 Porcalein
seriusly! anyone, someone i dont care who! JUST DO SOMTHING!
god i'm so pissed i just wanna beat the shit out of Tobias

(nothing towards you as the author i really love the story itself XD i just hate it when people take crap and doesn't to something about it)
7/15/2019 c33 13excessivelyperky
Oh, Eileen, what makes you think Tobias will change? Will he beat on this child, too?
12/30/2017 c8 MasonMac
Oh dang bois! Its gonna be a love triangle! Lily's gonna love Ann and Sev's gonna be jealous!
But on a serious note, a lot of the wording is kinda stiff, it doesn't feel like Severus or Annettes saying those words etc.
9/17/2017 c40 7Faded Galaxia
AAAHHHH this was so beautiful...I cried a couple of times...hell, I'm crying right now...heading over to read the sequel right now! 3
8/24/2017 c13 Heaven's Mistake
"We won! We won! *pauses* We're doomed."
6/19/2017 c40 28Daughter of Thranduil
That was a lovely read. Snape spent so much of his life alone in the books, it's nice to think he has someone to love him and be happy with.
5/25/2017 c12 2Nilsia-Tengun
Ok this is actually a review for chapter 13, it wouldn't let me review it because I had read it before ages ago and left a short review, and you can't review the same chapter twice..

Loved this : the air tasted of sunbaked dead leaves on a forest floor.

and this: The Gryffindor Captain smiled at her with such a devilish smirk that it would make a fox proud.

and this: The bludger zoomed off after bat cracked against, giggling like a madman.

and this: like a rat being caught with a morsel of food

This chapter was chock-a-block with beautiful expressions. I was really impressed. It's also great to see the Hufflepuffs succeed every once in a while :D
4/3/2017 c13 Nilsia-Tengun
"Like a badger after a snake" - Love this line.
4/3/2017 c10 Nilsia-Tengun
I like the details you give about the Muggle Studies course because it's not something we learn anything about from canon.

I also liked the expression "to hang out with her fellow badgers", it sounds very natural.
4/3/2017 c7 Nilsia-Tengun
Great chapter, It's nice to see a description of Annette through Severus' eyes.
3/26/2017 c4 Nilsia-Tengun
It's great to read classroom scenes, really reminds me of JKR. I love whenever magical beasts are mentioned because I don't know all the canon ones.

Your food descriptions are lovely. They make me hungry.

I laughed when Annette finished her spoonful before going to help Snape. Girl has her priorities right.
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