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1/18/2015 c22 9awolflover2
I would've reviewed last chapter, except I just read it today! I've been busy with school, writing, and life in general. But I loved these two chapters a ton! I kinda wanna break into jail now and give Lysandre a stern lecture. I mean, first he tries to kill all the pokemon in at least Kalos, then he's a real jerk to my favorite shippings. I just realized how funny it would be to break into a jail. Most people are trying to break out, not in. Oh well, I guess I'm just weird that way. I should join Looker's team! Me, him, and Emma all kicking butt in the International Police! Hi-yah! But I can't wait for both the epilogue and sequel! So please update as soon as you possibly can, and excuse me while I go see if it's possible to break into the jail where they're holding Lysandre prisoner to give him a stern lecture about 42. Wolfie out! Peace!
1/18/2015 c22 1Ploefje
Cuteeeee! Will you make them all kiss in the next chapter? Some loveydovey romance please!
1/16/2015 c22 born on CS day
Awesome chapter.

Can't wait the last/next one.
1/16/2015 c1 1cwtch1
I was planning on commenting st the end, but I had to point out one thing.
Its not ironic that leaf green LOVES green. It'd be ironic if she hated green. Irony is (and I quote) "a state of affairs or an event that seems deliberately contrary to what one expects and is often amusing as a result."

CONTRARY.

Other than that, interesting story. I am curious as to why the four of them are being targetted, but youll probably reveal that eventually.
1/14/2015 c22 3DemigodPrefect
Great, but quick question. Will May forgive Drew/Drew forgive May (for kissing Brendan and for "not answering the thingamagiger") GAH I SHIP IT AND I HATE IT WHEN MY SHIPS ARE DESTROYED!
1/14/2015 c22 vocavocagirl
this story is gonna get happier 3 :D
1/14/2015 c22 KittyCat134
HEHEHEHEHE I LOVE THIS CHAPPY A LOT! It was cute that Paul was worried about Dawn xD
Hope you update soon
1/14/2015 c22 77QUEENSPELLER67
Wait, is Jess based on CookiesandCreamNess? I wouldn't stop reviewing, considering I've got stories going. Plus, I'm at a bit of a creator's block for one of my crossovers.
1/14/2015 c22 Lazuli Lily
I love the story!
1/14/2015 c22 xxxxkjxxxx
Yay ! Drew finally wakes up! That means Contestshipping! X3
Can't wait for next chapter and the sequel :D
1/14/2015 c22 1Sakura Touko
Oh god, is an incredible, but May's poor person, oh already I want to know that it was happening, it becomes so exciting.
1/14/2015 c22 3schoolmouse33
Awww...but YEA! In a way, they still win! Poor May, hopefully things will end well. Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next, update soon!
1/14/2015 c22 5PolarDawn
Hahah, welcome back to the world of fanfiction! To be completely honest, I had kinda forgotten that I was reading this fic, and had to reread the end of the last chapter. Anyway, I'm super happy that you avoided the cliche sort of ending where EOTL wins everything. I'm still curious about the doctor though. Does she just want Drew to herself, or does she have some kind of ulterior motive?

Anyway, this was a great chapter, and I'm happy to hear that you have the next update planned out!
1/14/2015 c22 27jayfeather12345
Well consider me surprised, I thought EOTL would win for sure! But at least they got their record deal (or whatever it's called), which is all that matters. Plus I'm super excited for when Drew wakes up, I can't believe it's the epilogue next chapter!
Good work, keep it up :)
1/14/2015 c22 1PrimalGroudon
I was going to guess if something twisted like this was gonna happen. Heh. Hoping for rednasyL ot kaerb tuo fo liaj ot teg sih egnever. ;3

Shiny reverse those letters. .3.
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