for Technical Difficulties4/16/2014 c16 
3Darman Sejuk
Ya. i could see Shepard's' reaction to Alanko's rant. Hows Tali reacting now that Shepard's back.
3Darman SejukYa. i could see Shepard's' reaction to Alanko's rant. Hows Tali reacting now that Shepard's back.
4/15/2014 c16 4DKLC
Oh poor Kaidan, so unlucky in love. Still, it was kinda sweet to see him get head butted in the face.
You're writing was really exceptional in this chapter. Very rich vocabulary used which was a treat to read. I'm looking forward to Tali coming back into it, should be interesting.
And thank you very much for the shout out, you are far too kind. I'm glad you're enjoying my story as much as I am enjoying yours.
4DKLCOh poor Kaidan, so unlucky in love. Still, it was kinda sweet to see him get head butted in the face.
You're writing was really exceptional in this chapter. Very rich vocabulary used which was a treat to read. I'm looking forward to Tali coming back into it, should be interesting.
And thank you very much for the shout out, you are far too kind. I'm glad you're enjoying my story as much as I am enjoying yours.
4/15/2014 c16 RichGuy
Would of liked to see the learn what the partical beam does, eg on the protean , every ging els was great especially head butting kaiden :p.
RG
Would of liked to see the learn what the partical beam does, eg on the protean , every ging els was great especially head butting kaiden :p.
RG
4/13/2014 c15 DKLC
I love the change in Garrus, well written. He was so much more of a renegade bad boy by ME2, it's awesome.
The line "I need to... not glow," was fantastic. Poor renegade Shep! Great to see Grunt onboard, I love that boy.
Thank you so much for the shout out, you wonderful person. I have officially hit the follow button so maybe I won't be weeks late with the next review!
I love the change in Garrus, well written. He was so much more of a renegade bad boy by ME2, it's awesome.
The line "I need to... not glow," was fantastic. Poor renegade Shep! Great to see Grunt onboard, I love that boy.
Thank you so much for the shout out, you wonderful person. I have officially hit the follow button so maybe I won't be weeks late with the next review!
4/2/2014 c7 aknelson
This is very good. I've read a lot of ME fics, and your Shepard stands out as unique and 'real'. I'm shit at reviews, but I really hope you keep writing!
This is very good. I've read a lot of ME fics, and your Shepard stands out as unique and 'real'. I'm shit at reviews, but I really hope you keep writing!
3/19/2014 c7 4LordTicky
A very sad, but very beautifully written chapter. As a side note, I loved that you kept in Kirrahe's 'hold the line' speech.
4LordTickyA very sad, but very beautifully written chapter. As a side note, I loved that you kept in Kirrahe's 'hold the line' speech.
3/12/2014 c14 4DKLC
Miranda Lawson is awesome, I so, SO wholeheartedly agree. Am I sensing the beginnings of a love triangle here?
4DKLCMiranda Lawson is awesome, I so, SO wholeheartedly agree. Am I sensing the beginnings of a love triangle here?
3/12/2014 c10 DKLC
Poor Tali. I've never read a fic that had Shepard's funeral before. That was good.
Poor Tali. I've never read a fic that had Shepard's funeral before. That was good.
3/12/2014 c9 DKLC
Good chapter. You captured the newness of Tali having her bare skin touched for the first time very well. That was a very nice scene.
Good chapter. You captured the newness of Tali having her bare skin touched for the first time very well. That was a very nice scene.
3/12/2014 c8 DKLC
Good look at the history and backstory. We did something similar with the lost love being a reason behind Torfan - great mind's think alike!
Good look at the history and backstory. We did something similar with the lost love being a reason behind Torfan - great mind's think alike!
3/12/2014 c7 DKLC
Virmire, I hate it arrrrrgh!
Nice to see Shepard getting a little bit of comfort from her love interest after making that difficult decision.
Virmire, I hate it arrrrrgh!
Nice to see Shepard getting a little bit of comfort from her love interest after making that difficult decision.
3/12/2014 c5 DKLC
Lol, she doesn't trust Liara and Kaidan because they're too pretty. Funny.
Wrex and renegade Shepard really are soulmates, aren't they? I love that man.
Good scene with Conrad. Fuck that dude's annoying!
Lol, she doesn't trust Liara and Kaidan because they're too pretty. Funny.
Wrex and renegade Shepard really are soulmates, aren't they? I love that man.
Good scene with Conrad. Fuck that dude's annoying!
3/12/2014 c4 DKLC
Interesting view into Shepard almost regretting her renegade move against the Rachni.
Poor Tali with her father. Imagine how much he'd disapprove if he ever found out what's really going on between them!
Interesting view into Shepard almost regretting her renegade move against the Rachni.
Poor Tali with her father. Imagine how much he'd disapprove if he ever found out what's really going on between them!