
11/4/2013 c1 No longer functioning account
I think It's great so far! Just make a little longer chapters and you should be good 2 go :)
I think It's great so far! Just make a little longer chapters and you should be good 2 go :)
11/4/2013 c1 I amm Groot
Interesting first chapter! I'm intrigued! I'm betting mother nature is calling jack and other weather spirts:)
Interesting first chapter! I'm intrigued! I'm betting mother nature is calling jack and other weather spirts:)
11/4/2013 c1
2Little Miss Winter Mischief
Yay you've got your very own story and its awesome! Can't wait to know what happens next!
Ever faithful reader,
Snowball

Yay you've got your very own story and its awesome! Can't wait to know what happens next!
Ever faithful reader,
Snowball
11/4/2013 c1
14Wolfrunner99-2
This is a GREAT start! And don't worry about the updates. First stories rarely are updated on a regular basis. But please do try to update soon! I want to find out what is happening next!

This is a GREAT start! And don't worry about the updates. First stories rarely are updated on a regular basis. But please do try to update soon! I want to find out what is happening next!