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11/8/2013 c3 11Senile-felineS
D'aww! So cute. Although, that isn't even really a lime. This chapter was a lot easier to understand than the previous one. I'm a little bleak that this is the end, but i'm looking forward to a new dd story.
11/8/2013 c2 Senile-felineS
I'm slipping up, i only just saw this chapter. To be honest, i found it a little tricky to sometimes follow what was going on, might i suggest paragraph breaks between speakers in a dialogue? And maybe a little more description so that it is clearer what is going on?
11/6/2013 c2 5Vulpix's Fire
Wow great story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
11/5/2013 c1 82Sycocat2
Here's thelink to the fic- s/2557875/1/Old-friendships-new-loves
11/5/2013 c1 11Senile-felineS
Aw, Krayon's becoming a real boy, lol. Cool first chapter. Might i suggest adding a link to the old story, cos otherwise it might not make sense to those who don't know about your new penname?

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