for Hashirama's Heir1/23 c2 Pat9921
nobody knew about the kyubii being inside a jinchuriki in konoha except only a few as it was a secret ya dipshit. nobody knew kushina was a jinchuriki and also about mito. you dipshit.
nobody knew about the kyubii being inside a jinchuriki in konoha except only a few as it was a secret ya dipshit. nobody knew kushina was a jinchuriki and also about mito. you dipshit.
1/23 c1 Pat9921
what the hell dude i thought it was actually gping to be good when you didn't just make the villagers fucking make mobs and marched on naruto and stab him or whatnot. i thought you would have some sense in the plot making but making naruto having everything that hashirama has when he was an adult seems stupid as hell.
hashirama probably had to actually train that chakra control dude, he didn't just have it. giving him everything and taking everything negative about him like how he kinda is an idiot but still has monsttous instincts. come on dude. you just gave him everything you wanted that is not how you write my man this is just shitty power fantasy.
what the hell dude i thought it was actually gping to be good when you didn't just make the villagers fucking make mobs and marched on naruto and stab him or whatnot. i thought you would have some sense in the plot making but making naruto having everything that hashirama has when he was an adult seems stupid as hell.
hashirama probably had to actually train that chakra control dude, he didn't just have it. giving him everything and taking everything negative about him like how he kinda is an idiot but still has monsttous instincts. come on dude. you just gave him everything you wanted that is not how you write my man this is just shitty power fantasy.
1/19 c12 Zamamiro
Not killing Orochimaru, next will be letting them escape yet again when facing off in Tea country, just to keep them alive for the reincarnation of Madara... why oh why in a fanfic can't author not let go of that crutch ?
Not killing Orochimaru, next will be letting them escape yet again when facing off in Tea country, just to keep them alive for the reincarnation of Madara... why oh why in a fanfic can't author not let go of that crutch ?
12/31/2024 c33 Rena
IDK if its just me, but IMO Naruto's prank almost ruins the story for me. Dunno why, maybe its just because of how out of place it feels due to how distasteful it is. It also makes this chapter seem like it only exists to retcon an undesirable ending, thus ultimately I guess it leaves the story feeling incomplete. Not to mention that this chapter feels contrived, with it being specifically crafted to bamboozle us into thinking Yugito is mourning Naruto's death only to throw GOTCHA at us at the last minute... Anyways, enough bitching, that all being said, pretty good story. I like Sasuke's characterization, he is still quiet and anti-social like in canon, but he's a likeable character in this story. One of my favorite things about this fic, though, is how ROOT saw through Danzo hypocrisy (With Sasuke's and Naruto's characterization in this story, they are essential assets of Konoha and are loyal without a doubt. Therefore their death would not benefit Konoha, only Danzo). Aside from the ending I think my only gripe is how Sasuke is dealt with post-Orochimaru. His romance with Kurotsuchi is shoehorned in and the only thing truly relevant that he does after returning to Konoha is serving as a plot device to bring back Itachi before becoming irrelevant in the final conflict.
IDK if its just me, but IMO Naruto's prank almost ruins the story for me. Dunno why, maybe its just because of how out of place it feels due to how distasteful it is. It also makes this chapter seem like it only exists to retcon an undesirable ending, thus ultimately I guess it leaves the story feeling incomplete. Not to mention that this chapter feels contrived, with it being specifically crafted to bamboozle us into thinking Yugito is mourning Naruto's death only to throw GOTCHA at us at the last minute... Anyways, enough bitching, that all being said, pretty good story. I like Sasuke's characterization, he is still quiet and anti-social like in canon, but he's a likeable character in this story. One of my favorite things about this fic, though, is how ROOT saw through Danzo hypocrisy (With Sasuke's and Naruto's characterization in this story, they are essential assets of Konoha and are loyal without a doubt. Therefore their death would not benefit Konoha, only Danzo). Aside from the ending I think my only gripe is how Sasuke is dealt with post-Orochimaru. His romance with Kurotsuchi is shoehorned in and the only thing truly relevant that he does after returning to Konoha is serving as a plot device to bring back Itachi before becoming irrelevant in the final conflict.
12/29/2024 c25 Guest
I have to say the book so far is amazing but the power scaling you use so is severely off right now in this book Naruto if using the anime and manga as a reference should be able to squash everyone he's faced so far with little to no difficulty just gaining full access to half or kuruma's chakra made him stronger and faster than anyone in the anime by giving him access to all of it no one should even be able to touch him and that not even including how much more powerful he would be with wood release and a sage made that is similar to hashiramas to be honest with how powerful Naruto should be in your book he should barely even struggle against kaguya let alone the people he is struggling against
I have to say the book so far is amazing but the power scaling you use so is severely off right now in this book Naruto if using the anime and manga as a reference should be able to squash everyone he's faced so far with little to no difficulty just gaining full access to half or kuruma's chakra made him stronger and faster than anyone in the anime by giving him access to all of it no one should even be able to touch him and that not even including how much more powerful he would be with wood release and a sage made that is similar to hashiramas to be honest with how powerful Naruto should be in your book he should barely even struggle against kaguya let alone the people he is struggling against
111/5/2024 c3 zPotatoMan
Despite this being an old story, I just wanna say that I'm already liking this better than canon Naruto lol
Despite this being an old story, I just wanna say that I'm already liking this better than canon Naruto lol
10/14/2024 c1 Guest
All my homies hate Hiruzen.
Hiruzen and Itachi may have been two of the dumbest people in the entire series and it's funny because they're considered genius, but their life choices say otherwise. I guess being a battle genius is totally different from being street smart. Itachi was Danzo's sheep and Hiruzen was... also Danzo's sheep but he failed Naruto above all.
All my homies hate Hiruzen.
Hiruzen and Itachi may have been two of the dumbest people in the entire series and it's funny because they're considered genius, but their life choices say otherwise. I guess being a battle genius is totally different from being street smart. Itachi was Danzo's sheep and Hiruzen was... also Danzo's sheep but he failed Naruto above all.
9/15/2024 c33 Guest
best fanfic ive read fr
best fanfic ive read fr
5/7/2024 c2 Guest
In this fic, people, even adults are acting and reacting like children.
For example, Naruto reveals he is Senju, and Iruka faints. Like wtf? Isn't the dude supposed to be a ninja? It's ridiculous.
In this fic, people, even adults are acting and reacting like children.
For example, Naruto reveals he is Senju, and Iruka faints. Like wtf? Isn't the dude supposed to be a ninja? It's ridiculous.
4/29/2024 c3 Average BabaBoi
when i was a 13 year old nearing 14, It was the last time I tested my height by putting myself next to a wall and the mark is still there, I was 5 foot 9 and I wasn't THAT tall next to other kids my age so naruto is below average
when i was a 13 year old nearing 14, It was the last time I tested my height by putting myself next to a wall and the mark is still there, I was 5 foot 9 and I wasn't THAT tall next to other kids my age so naruto is below average
3/25/2024 c9 Brian
To bad this wasn’t canon. Naruto having Senju blood and wood style definitely earned him the respect he dreamed of. Anko is definitely after Naruto as well. Please please bring Anko and Naruto together please. Anko is my favorite girl. Ino is so so. Hinata gets Naruto way to many times. Please please consider Anko x Naruto.
To bad this wasn’t canon. Naruto having Senju blood and wood style definitely earned him the respect he dreamed of. Anko is definitely after Naruto as well. Please please bring Anko and Naruto together please. Anko is my favorite girl. Ino is so so. Hinata gets Naruto way to many times. Please please consider Anko x Naruto.
3/25/2024 c7 Brian
So far great stuff. It’s refreshing to read a Naruto story about Naruto not getting beaten up and Naruto being strong and smarts. Please please consider Anko x Naruto. Anko and Naruto belong together. They have so much in common. In Konoha,once you get your headband you are an adult. To ninjas,age is just a number,especially when you face death in any mission you go on.
So far great stuff. It’s refreshing to read a Naruto story about Naruto not getting beaten up and Naruto being strong and smarts. Please please consider Anko x Naruto. Anko and Naruto belong together. They have so much in common. In Konoha,once you get your headband you are an adult. To ninjas,age is just a number,especially when you face death in any mission you go on.