for Hashirama's Heir2/6 c8 Guest
Until now u stick too much to the canon story. Naruto has the mokuton and u barely use his mokuton abilities in the story even if its the techniques that uses the least amount of chakra. Not even the wood clones are mentioned that naruto could use in his advantage. Until now its too much copy paste from canon...such a shame...no originality.
Until now u stick too much to the canon story. Naruto has the mokuton and u barely use his mokuton abilities in the story even if its the techniques that uses the least amount of chakra. Not even the wood clones are mentioned that naruto could use in his advantage. Until now its too much copy paste from canon...such a shame...no originality.
12/1/2022 c31 kevinthegoat0304
Im sorry but I don’t see yugito being useful in a fight against madara at all. Like she will be damn near fodder even with the boost.
Im sorry but I don’t see yugito being useful in a fight against madara at all. Like she will be damn near fodder even with the boost.
11/27/2022 c33 Beastyd22
Awesome chapter and story man keep it up and I'll see you on the next story.
Awesome chapter and story man keep it up and I'll see you on the next story.
11/26/2022 c7 ACompleteIdiot
Moegi is like 8, please stop with the having a crush on naruto thing. its really disgusting
Moegi is like 8, please stop with the having a crush on naruto thing. its really disgusting
11/25/2022 c33 Guest
This was one of the best books I've read and most authors couldn't care less about finishing the story. You should be proud of yourself for this amazing book
This was one of the best books I've read and most authors couldn't care less about finishing the story. You should be proud of yourself for this amazing book
11/24/2022 c2 kevinthegoat0304
A more stupid naruto learned the jutsu faster than this…1 hour makes no sense. Naruto pumping a large chunk of chakra already gets him at least 50
A more stupid naruto learned the jutsu faster than this…1 hour makes no sense. Naruto pumping a large chunk of chakra already gets him at least 50
11/21/2022 c33 Guest
In my honest opinion this Is the way Naruto should for this fanfiction
In my honest opinion this Is the way Naruto should for this fanfiction
11/6/2022 c33 
2Pinkypi
That was actually pretty good. I legit thought Naruto either died and left his own legacy or would come back while she was alone. Not that it was a joke from the start of him cracking into pieces.
Whole damn story was good. :D
2PinkypiThat was actually pretty good. I legit thought Naruto either died and left his own legacy or would come back while she was alone. Not that it was a joke from the start of him cracking into pieces.
Whole damn story was good. :D
11/6/2022 c24 Pinkypi
pretty sure it was stated that his Jutsu that he used to make himself immortal by swapping bodies made it so he couldn't use sage mode.
pretty sure it was stated that his Jutsu that he used to make himself immortal by swapping bodies made it so he couldn't use sage mode.
11/6/2022 c15 Pinkypi
Anbu are supposed to be like BADASSES. only problem is they were routinely made into a Joke during the entirety of Naruto xD
Anbu are supposed to be like BADASSES. only problem is they were routinely made into a Joke during the entirety of Naruto xD
10/14/2022 c1 LordLordyLord
Story is okay, but Naruto is already a Gary Stu by chapter three. That's never a good sign. It's fine to have a prodigious character, but even their growth is somewhat slow. For example, while Kakashi was hailed as a prodigy, it was mainly due to how quickly he mastered the academy TaiJutsu and ninjutsu techniques... Not because he knew virtually everything and had seventeen abilities or so before he graduated. It'd be better if he graduated early and those techniques were brought up later on.
That said, early mokuton training would make sense, but still not at the speed you bring it up. I feel like his chakra control should have been given an "okay" rating, which still would be impressive for someone like Naruto, and would allow room for growth and a smoother transition into mokuton training.
Story is okay, but Naruto is already a Gary Stu by chapter three. That's never a good sign. It's fine to have a prodigious character, but even their growth is somewhat slow. For example, while Kakashi was hailed as a prodigy, it was mainly due to how quickly he mastered the academy TaiJutsu and ninjutsu techniques... Not because he knew virtually everything and had seventeen abilities or so before he graduated. It'd be better if he graduated early and those techniques were brought up later on.
That said, early mokuton training would make sense, but still not at the speed you bring it up. I feel like his chakra control should have been given an "okay" rating, which still would be impressive for someone like Naruto, and would allow room for growth and a smoother transition into mokuton training.