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3/2/2020 c1 Marvelqueen13
That had me VERY confused
3/23/2014 c1 1smarticles103
Oh computers you gotta love them... Can't wait to read another one of your stories!
3/2/2014 c1 3nightflightthehero
Heehee, you should make a series out of this!
2/24/2014 c1 6TheFoolOnMelancholyHill
Hehe, you remind me of me, I had no idea what R&R was either for quite some time, and I had no idea what AU was either. I just recently figured out what OTP is...I'm a sad person :(

The beginning had me a little confused. I'm also a little confused on Richard and Kori's "relationship" beforehand, like how they knew each other or if they were complete strangers who had just met and Kori decided to research some more information on him. I know it's a one-shot, but if you could decipher those things a little more, I think that it'd really make a difference.

I actually really wish this wasn't a one-shot, because now I want to know what happens next! :(

"And in the end, the love you take, is equal to the love...you make." "End" by The Beatles
1/31/2014 c1 12Princess Unikitty
The only real issue I have with this is that it seems to be a high school AU... when I read about professors, tests, and junior proms, I instantly flash back to that dark time nearly ten years ago, when lovestruck teenagers vented their hormones by writing sappy fanfics about Richard Grayson and Kori Anders and Garfield Logan and Rachel Roth, two couples that are so in love with each other it's unreal. I don't know why I didn't mention Cyborg, but I don't seem to remember him getting paired up much! Weird...

Nah, I'm kidding. I will admit, though, setting this in high school IS very cliched, but the way you executed the premise was pretty good. I wouldn't mind seeing this expanded, actually - that ending was mighty sudden!
12/2/2013 c1 TofuAndTea
Awesome, it needs no corrections(It might to other people but if u read my profile I don't criticize) Anyway, I loved it write more!
11/6/2013 c1 Guest
I still can't believe you posted and didn't tell me! It's such a brilliant story! I guess I'm next up for a first post…
Yeah, you already know how I feel. Pretty amazing story- for a rookie. ;)

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