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4/10/2020 c1 1KiraReaper
please update
12/15/2015 c1 12socialgirl378
Wow, I'm sorry. I could not take this seriously when I see Bleach and FMA referances along with a talking bat. XD I didn't like that the story's rushed. At least have it simmer before you get right to the meaty part.
3/6/2014 c1 secretwhovianpony
Was that? *gasp* It is! You put a "Bleach" reference in here! Oh, and I think that the story is being rushed here. All of the events here came and went far too quickly. And there isn't a lot of deceptive detail either. If you slow down the passing of the story and add more descriptive details, then your story will be golden! That is all.
11/6/2013 c1 12Princess Unikitty
cool idea for a crossover. keep it up.
11/6/2013 c1 6Pulsar747
Good job for the first chapter. I personally want to see dash get torn to shreds though... you don't have to though. I also like what you did with the skin thing. Very animaniacs of you.

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