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8/21/2019 c15 jakgarden2002
Harry gave gifts to 2 people?
7/24/2015 c19 FandomsForever74
I love how Voldemort thinks that a double wedding is sooo evil...
7/24/2015 c17 FandomsForever74
1. Cho is in Ravenclaw, and you had her mixed up with Hufflepuff.

2. Eagles dont have fur, they have feathers.

3. I know that you finished this story years ago, but these bugged me so much that I had to wright them down.

4. I love all of your stories so much!
7/12/2015 c14 HGLOVER15
Aldous and Holly are cute
1/3/2014 c3 Guest
Not trying to be mean by pointing things out only trying to help but you switched to third person in the end of this one, its better to stick with one point of view or the reader becomes confused.
1/3/2014 c2 Guest
I can't not point out the fact that you changed Hermione's father's name.
1/7/2013 c31 Danceing Raven
First I want to say that I loved the story, and any other comments are to improve future works not degrade this one. With that said.

I over the story your writing improved but I like at the beginning when the lines were more spaced, I also think that your characters could have more depth of emotion,ex. Hermionie not showing prolonged grief. My other comment is that things could have been a little less easy for them but a more descriptive story would counter that.

I just want to say that I love the story one lat time .

raven
8/20/2012 c31 1Don't Trust The Silver Eyes
Other than the names of those children the story was quite beautiful and captivating. I loved reading it but I must say, children named Albus or Minerva are Unfortunate. The names are hideous and I was disappointed you didn't give them an original sounding Malfoy name :(
Anyway good luck with future writing xxx
7/13/2012 c31 2HP fan not the sauce the book
loved it all the way hon!
5/27/2012 c24 5girllybell
Whatever happened to her pheonix she got from Snape?
1/18/2011 c31 10Musette Fujiwara
awesome
11/10/2010 c31 16kiera-sama
I adored this story. It was very well written and full of humor. I would like it if you would write a sequal as well.

~Kiera
11/10/2010 c26 kiera-sama
Mean of old Voldy to do that. :( Poor Hermione, having to go through that. I, however, do not think I could handle going through nine months of pregnancy in just a month and a half. I would have to prepare myself mentally first, and it would take the whole of the nine months to do that. Wonderful chapter.

~Kiera
11/10/2010 c21 kiera-sama
I expecially liked this chapter. I liked the color scheme for Draco and Hermione's room. Which is saying something for my favorite color happens to be black. I can't wait to see Harry and Ron's reactions to Hermiones marrying Draco. Also, of course, ha ha, Ginny's marriage. ;)

~Kiera
11/10/2010 c20 kiera-sama
aww. cute. lmao. dumbledore is funny. making them embarrased like that.
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