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1/7/2014 c7 reader82
I see a family reunion coming. Maybe not in the nearest future, but I'm sure this will include Mozzie, right? Hopefully Neal will learn to trust Peter and El enough to talk to them instead of doing such foolish things. I love your story and can't wait for more.
1/7/2014 c7 97peppe1951
Thank goodness Neal was found and is on his way to the would have been so much easier if Neal had told them about his brother, Mozzie...great chapter
1/7/2014 c6 peppe1951
Poor Neal...not good to be so cold that you've stopped shivering...hope Peter and El gets there soon!
1/7/2014 c5 peppe1951
I hope Neal can get back in before Peter discovers him missing, but I some how doubt it...good chapter
1/7/2014 c7 caseylf123
Great chapter! I look forward to seeing how Peter and El continue to gain Neal's trust and give him the loving home he deserves. They're going to have their hands full, but hands full of "Neal" is a wonderful thing!
1/7/2014 c1 Guest
This is very hard to follow - maybe you need more dialogue. I think you've tried to cram too many ideas into each paragraph. Try and lighten the load, luv.
1/6/2014 c6 17JeanneZ84
I sure hope everything will be ok.

1/6/2014 c6 daisesndaffidols
Hope Peter and El get to Neal soon..hope Neal isn't too sick, or won't get into too much trouble
1/6/2014 c6 reader82
Oh, that poor kid. What is wrong with him? I mean, this would be very fast for getting the flu or such. I hope, Peter and El get there very soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.
1/6/2014 c6 Guest
Great chapter. I really like this kidfic. Your young Neal is great. Update soon.
1/6/2014 c6 3Kajtena
Poor Neal, I hope they're going to find him in time.
1/6/2014 c6 3JayAoi
Aw no you need to update soon! This story is so great and I love your writing style! Neal is so adorable! Quick, whip out the next chapter!
1/6/2014 c6 1adoptarescue
Oh this just breaks my heart for little Neal :(
1/6/2014 c6 Guest
Poor kid... Will Peter be there in time?
1/5/2014 c6 Gloworm41
OMG what a cliffy! Thank God Neal had enough sense to call Peter. Please update soon.
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