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11/10/2013 c2 caseylf123
Great story. I'm hoping they take Mozzie, too. Can't wait for the next chapter.
11/10/2013 c1 8govgal
This sounds like it is going to be a wonderful story and I like that you are writing it from Neal's point of view, although it would be great if we could see some of Peter and Elle's thoughts about why they want to take Neal in. I'd also like to see what actually happened to land Neal in the hospital, maybe a flashback or Peter asking him or something. Great start!
11/10/2013 c2 Gloworm41
Their first meeting went pretty well. Sounds like Neal has a lot of things to work through but I am sure Peter and El are up to the challenge. Terrific job! Please update soon.
11/10/2013 c2 97peppe1951
Great chapter...I some how think that soon the Burke family will increase by one more when Mozzie joins the clan. I hope the next update will cone soon.
11/10/2013 c1 18Angusina
Very good chapter.
11/9/2013 c1 carlacipo
Very sweet so far
11/9/2013 c1 NYWCgirl
Poor thing... How will the meet go between Peter and Neal?
11/9/2013 c1 ginnyl
Ohh this is a great start. I can't wait for the rest of it

Write more soon
11/8/2013 c1 Gloworm41
Awesome start to this story! I love Neal kidfics especially when he is taken in by Peter and El. I am so looking forward to reading more of this story. Are you sure this is your first story? Great job!
11/8/2013 c1 Guest
11/8/2013 c1 Margarete1
Good night,

Our to be your first story is very good, I love fics with little Neal Caffrey especially when Peter and El have to take care of him, I hope that Mozzie go do part of their lives too, even though I did not understand if Mozzie is adult or child. Looking forward to continuing.

see you soon

11/8/2013 c1 Anon
Very interesting start. I am interested to see where this is going. Please post again soon.
11/8/2013 c1 9non identifiable username
That was such an adorable start! I loved it. Keep up the good work!
11/8/2013 c1 97peppe1951
Great start...can't wait to see what happens next...
11/8/2013 c1 3Kajtena
Great start ;-)
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