for Heart of Fire1/28 c24 Guest
So DONOVAN94 what was your favorite part of Heart of fire?
So DONOVAN94 what was your favorite part of Heart of fire?
1/16/2024 c15 FrostGunner2.0
This chapter still hits me in the feels even though i have read this before. I forgot how much i love this series and re-reading this story is Amazing
This chapter still hits me in the feels even though i have read this before. I forgot how much i love this series and re-reading this story is Amazing
2/27/2022 c24 Anabella Bell
amazing history. I love your way of narrating, it's very good. Thanks for sharing this 3
amazing history. I love your way of narrating, it's very good. Thanks for sharing this 3
1/22/2022 c24 Gravity012
Great story. Finished it in one day it was so good. Good job writing this! It’s really well done. Almost made me cry towards the end.
Great story. Finished it in one day it was so good. Good job writing this! It’s really well done. Almost made me cry towards the end.
7/20/2021 c24 
3SheWolfMedjai
That was amazing! Full of detail and it kept you on your toes! Thank you! This was a great read!
3SheWolfMedjaiThat was amazing! Full of detail and it kept you on your toes! Thank you! This was a great read!
7/13/2021 c1 Guest
Hopefully you resume your rewrite soon. Really looking forward to you revisiting this story with your improved writing skill.
Hopefully you resume your rewrite soon. Really looking forward to you revisiting this story with your improved writing skill.
4/23/2021 c11 6Twixst of the slough
I've really been enjoying this story. The interactions between Smaug and Katherine feel so real and natural.
That being said though, I feel like you missed a glaring opportunity for further tension between her and Smaug. In spite of all the "bonding" the two had done, Smaug still was willing to hurt her. He promised her he would let no harm come to her after she had the vision about the one ring, yet he still did hurt her heart. He swore to her that it was not his intention to frighten her when she had that ordeal with her magic, and that he would never do it again, and yet he did.
Even after all the time they've spent together, Smaug still sees her as nothing more than property, and did not hesitate to call her nothing, and that nothing was all she would ever be.
6Twixst of the sloughI've really been enjoying this story. The interactions between Smaug and Katherine feel so real and natural.
That being said though, I feel like you missed a glaring opportunity for further tension between her and Smaug. In spite of all the "bonding" the two had done, Smaug still was willing to hurt her. He promised her he would let no harm come to her after she had the vision about the one ring, yet he still did hurt her heart. He swore to her that it was not his intention to frighten her when she had that ordeal with her magic, and that he would never do it again, and yet he did.
Even after all the time they've spent together, Smaug still sees her as nothing more than property, and did not hesitate to call her nothing, and that nothing was all she would ever be.