for MISSION: Ghost, An OPERATION: Break the Dawn Extra4/21/2014 c1 nebfan51
Semper Fi! This was excellent...I had to read it in chunks...it really came across real. It amazed me how one second I was consumed with apprehension at what is going to happen next, chills with regard to the rescue and the next second laughing from the Marine camaraderie. THANK YOU for sharing...this was a masterful outtake!
Semper Fi! This was excellent...I had to read it in chunks...it really came across real. It amazed me how one second I was consumed with apprehension at what is going to happen next, chills with regard to the rescue and the next second laughing from the Marine camaraderie. THANK YOU for sharing...this was a masterful outtake!
1/6/2014 c1 Heatherl8367
Excellent outtake!though hellish. :( Loved this insight into the crew's first meeting.
Excellent outtake!though hellish. :( Loved this insight into the crew's first meeting.
1/2/2014 c1 
2Who'sTorchwoodHarryDoctorDraco
I enjoyed reading this out-take so much! I love the way OBtD is written in general, but for some reason this outtake had me even more hooked than usual. Plus it's nearly 6AM and I've got insomnia, so to be that hooked into reading when I'm this sleep deprived is definitely something...
Feel free to write a follow-up outtake. I'd be interested in reading how Edward assembled the team or, you know, anything you want really; you're such a good writer I'd probably read anything you wrote and love it,
2Who'sTorchwoodHarryDoctorDracoI enjoyed reading this out-take so much! I love the way OBtD is written in general, but for some reason this outtake had me even more hooked than usual. Plus it's nearly 6AM and I've got insomnia, so to be that hooked into reading when I'm this sleep deprived is definitely something...
Feel free to write a follow-up outtake. I'd be interested in reading how Edward assembled the team or, you know, anything you want really; you're such a good writer I'd probably read anything you wrote and love it,
12/18/2013 c1 justsoheather
Thank you for the outtake. Poor E wen through hell :( I like knowing their back story more and it helps to understand the teams bond even more.
Thank you for the outtake. Poor E wen through hell :( I like knowing their back story more and it helps to understand the teams bond even more.
11/26/2013 c1 Anita
Must have been tough to write this, but it is very well done. Thank you.
Must have been tough to write this, but it is very well done. Thank you.