for MISSION: Ghost, An OPERATION: Break the Dawn Extra1/6/2014 c1 Heatherl8367
Excellent outtake!though hellish. :( Loved this insight into the crew's first meeting.
Excellent outtake!though hellish. :( Loved this insight into the crew's first meeting.
1/2/2014 c1 
2Who'sTorchwoodHarryDoctorDraco
I enjoyed reading this out-take so much! I love the way OBtD is written in general, but for some reason this outtake had me even more hooked than usual. Plus it's nearly 6AM and I've got insomnia, so to be that hooked into reading when I'm this sleep deprived is definitely something...
Feel free to write a follow-up outtake. I'd be interested in reading how Edward assembled the team or, you know, anything you want really; you're such a good writer I'd probably read anything you wrote and love it,
2Who'sTorchwoodHarryDoctorDracoI enjoyed reading this out-take so much! I love the way OBtD is written in general, but for some reason this outtake had me even more hooked than usual. Plus it's nearly 6AM and I've got insomnia, so to be that hooked into reading when I'm this sleep deprived is definitely something...
Feel free to write a follow-up outtake. I'd be interested in reading how Edward assembled the team or, you know, anything you want really; you're such a good writer I'd probably read anything you wrote and love it,
12/18/2013 c1 justsoheather
Thank you for the outtake. Poor E wen through hell :( I like knowing their back story more and it helps to understand the teams bond even more.
Thank you for the outtake. Poor E wen through hell :( I like knowing their back story more and it helps to understand the teams bond even more.
11/26/2013 c1 Anita
Must have been tough to write this, but it is very well done. Thank you.
Must have been tough to write this, but it is very well done. Thank you.
11/15/2013 c1 Shamatt0403
Awesome! I waited till kiddies were away with hubby so I could savory this chapter. Needed to be that kind of mood and after the day I had at work I needed kick ass marines lighting up the mountain. Thank you sharing this great story with us. We need less over paid Kayne West types and more Marines!
Awesome! I waited till kiddies were away with hubby so I could savory this chapter. Needed to be that kind of mood and after the day I had at work I needed kick ass marines lighting up the mountain. Thank you sharing this great story with us. We need less over paid Kayne West types and more Marines!
11/14/2013 c1 Dee
The intensity of your writing astonishes me! Ever sentences is structured to add passion to the plot. I didn't even realize this gem existed until I clicked on your profile. With your next update to OBTD you should plug this one shot at the end. I'm positive lots of your followers on that story would enjoy this extra but are unaware of it's existence.
The intensity of your writing astonishes me! Ever sentences is structured to add passion to the plot. I didn't even realize this gem existed until I clicked on your profile. With your next update to OBTD you should plug this one shot at the end. I'm positive lots of your followers on that story would enjoy this extra but are unaware of it's existence.