for MISSION: Ghost, An OPERATION: Break the Dawn Extra11/15/2013 c1 Shamatt0403
Awesome! I waited till kiddies were away with hubby so I could savory this chapter. Needed to be that kind of mood and after the day I had at work I needed kick ass marines lighting up the mountain. Thank you sharing this great story with us. We need less over paid Kayne West types and more Marines!
Awesome! I waited till kiddies were away with hubby so I could savory this chapter. Needed to be that kind of mood and after the day I had at work I needed kick ass marines lighting up the mountain. Thank you sharing this great story with us. We need less over paid Kayne West types and more Marines!
11/14/2013 c1 Dee
The intensity of your writing astonishes me! Ever sentences is structured to add passion to the plot. I didn't even realize this gem existed until I clicked on your profile. With your next update to OBTD you should plug this one shot at the end. I'm positive lots of your followers on that story would enjoy this extra but are unaware of it's existence.
The intensity of your writing astonishes me! Ever sentences is structured to add passion to the plot. I didn't even realize this gem existed until I clicked on your profile. With your next update to OBTD you should plug this one shot at the end. I'm positive lots of your followers on that story would enjoy this extra but are unaware of it's existence.
11/13/2013 c1 
7Maxennce
Awesome! There's a story hanging around cyber space for jack o'niells incarceration in Iraq which is awesome! I highly recommend it
7MaxennceAwesome! There's a story hanging around cyber space for jack o'niells incarceration in Iraq which is awesome! I highly recommend it
11/12/2013 c1 kinsano
I loved it as usual! Sure it was gruesome, but you made it believable without getting to the slice-by-burn details! I think you had the perfect combo of realism without gratuitous violence! Great job! And I loved the team's introduction and interaction. Your characters are so vivid, I expect to turn around and see one of them...
I loved it as usual! Sure it was gruesome, but you made it believable without getting to the slice-by-burn details! I think you had the perfect combo of realism without gratuitous violence! Great job! And I loved the team's introduction and interaction. Your characters are so vivid, I expect to turn around and see one of them...
11/12/2013 c1 6cejsmom
Awesome job at putting the reader in the middle of a horrific experience. I totally appreciate your story even more now.
6cejsmomAwesome job at putting the reader in the middle of a horrific experience. I totally appreciate your story even more now.
11/12/2013 c1 Luvvykitty
Amazing style as always! The content was graphic but spoke a lot over his dedication to his team and country. Poor Edward really deserves some lovin, from someone-maybe a certain doctor...after all that he truly deserves some open loving arms to come home to! Thanks so much for your brilliant writing!
Amazing style as always! The content was graphic but spoke a lot over his dedication to his team and country. Poor Edward really deserves some lovin, from someone-maybe a certain doctor...after all that he truly deserves some open loving arms to come home to! Thanks so much for your brilliant writing!
11/12/2013 c1 mdsngrc
This was wonderful! I loved getting into his head to know more about him and the way his team started. I'm glad to see even through all of that he still retained his sarcasm. I was a very weepy mess by the end her. Makes me want some more chapters of anything...LOL!
This was wonderful! I loved getting into his head to know more about him and the way his team started. I'm glad to see even through all of that he still retained his sarcasm. I was a very weepy mess by the end her. Makes me want some more chapters of anything...LOL!
11/11/2013 c1 Dans l'ombre
This was a perfect "extra". Gritty and tough to read, but it adds so much. Edward is amazing. No wonder he's like Jasper said "a big deal". Great job and thanks for posting it.
This was a perfect "extra". Gritty and tough to read, but it adds so much. Edward is amazing. No wonder he's like Jasper said "a big deal". Great job and thanks for posting it.
11/11/2013 c1 allidel
Amazing little extra! It makes me miss OBtD even more. I steeled myself for the torture stuff in the beginning, but you had me crying when he said that 'he kind of wanted to leave'. It always astounds me how something so horrific can be written so well that I feel everything for him. You have a gift!
I love that we got this little back piece to explain how they came to be the team we know & love today! I'm curious if that 'wide-eyed 22 yr old lance corporal' is our favorite sniper? If not, it's still great to see the other three. I have even more respect for Ghost after what he has endured, and you can tell his team does as well. I look forward to seeing more of the team and our favorite scientist in the next chapter of OBtD! Thank you as always for sharing my favorite story!
allidel :)
Amazing little extra! It makes me miss OBtD even more. I steeled myself for the torture stuff in the beginning, but you had me crying when he said that 'he kind of wanted to leave'. It always astounds me how something so horrific can be written so well that I feel everything for him. You have a gift!
I love that we got this little back piece to explain how they came to be the team we know & love today! I'm curious if that 'wide-eyed 22 yr old lance corporal' is our favorite sniper? If not, it's still great to see the other three. I have even more respect for Ghost after what he has endured, and you can tell his team does as well. I look forward to seeing more of the team and our favorite scientist in the next chapter of OBtD! Thank you as always for sharing my favorite story!
allidel :)